Multiverse with Two Systems

The shameless author is dropping a shameless 5 stars for no particular reason. If you enjoyed this fanfic novel drop some stone on the way and let me know your thoughts :D

I won't be too harsh since it's your first book but i think pointing out faults in your writing style will make you much better rather than hurt your feelings so here goes nothing repetitive words ( ex. the young boy, if you look, etc) not so fluid writing - can't put it in properly but yeah reading feels odd

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