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Magic Swordsman In One Piece (D&D)

Tác giả: KuroWashi1903
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Two unfortunate boys, one from Earth and one from one piece. One of them wants vengeance the other wants justice. With the help of an omnipotent being, they become one. Let us see if their unfortunate lives are going to turn for the better or if it is going to be a life of misery and hardship. A/n: in this fan-fic, I am going to change people's age to fit my story. So it is going to be a bit of an AU. The system is not going the have an ego. The Sword Saint is a D&D magus subclass, and it is NOT a cultivation class. I am not going to follow D&D rules and class spells, Mc's class was inspired by D&D, but I can go beyond D&D rules and get spells from different classes or create other spells. I can only guarantee one chapter a week. Mc is not going to be a straw hat and not going to take a straw hat as a companion. Disclaimer: I don't own One Piece; it belongs to its respective author.

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Chapter 1CHAPTER 1

CHAPTER 1

East Blue looked very calm and peaceful on this night. The sea lay flat like a vast dark blue sheet illuminated with only moonlight, but small flashes stood out at the other end of the horizon. Two ships were moving one after the other. From one ship, screams of angst and fear were ripping the tranquil night while bloodthirsty cries arose from the other. A pirate ship was chasing a cruise ship to loot. The succession of cannonballs and their whistling approaching the ship overwhelmed everyone on board with fear.

Although any cannonball did not hit it, the rudder of the ship broke apart with a loud noise. It was no longer possible to control this ship. As he could no longer change direction with the wind, the pirate ship was slowly approaching, and with one last shot, they managed to smash the main mast too.

Even though the pirate ship was still 100 meters away, silhouettes emerged from the water and silently climbed onto the ship. When the tens of silhouettes boarded the ship, more screams of agony and fear started to rise.

A man was trying to protect his family with a sword and a gun in his hand. But the pirates were very numerous, and their numbers were increasing. One of the pirates had managed to pounce on the man and knock him down. Just then, the young woman behind him picked up a gun she found on the ground and fired at the silhouette she could barely see in the dark. The girl missed, but sensing the bullet's passage, the pirate lost his attention momentarily, and the father stabbed him and got out of the way.

The man turned and called out to those behind him.

"Get down to the rescue raft, quick."

While forcibly holding back the two pirates, a third came and injured the man on his right side. Screaming, the young girl fired the gun again and was able to shoot one of the pirates this time, but this did not bring a good result. one of the pirates with a rifle saw his crew mate get killed and shot the young girl. The mother saw her husband and daughter getting killed and shielded her only remaining family with her body.

Just as the other pirates were going to shoot the mother and son, when a cannonball hit the side deck, the boy fell from the ship, and the bullets only hit the mother. This poor boy watched his entire family slaughtered by pirates and disappear into the dark waters of the sea.

.......

The sun had already risen, and a scorching heat was beginning to spread over the vast sea. This was Kreegan's second day on a beam of wood. The waves hitting the piece of wood for two days had been rocking it from side to side. For the first time, dark thoughts were running through that 6-year-old boy's mind, wondering if he should stop holding on at this very moment. His mother and father came to his mind, and a great sadness washed over him. He no longer had a father to carve a sword with and a mother to run to and hug when he bled. Thin, salty tears streamed down his little face and mingled with the sea's salty waters.

With every tear flowing, the hands holding the piece of wood were starting to lose strength, and he suddenly found himself sinking into the blue depths. He was so tired, hungry, and thirsty that he wanted to close his eyes now. However, at that moment, he heard his mother's voice telling him, "Fight, do not give up." and his father's voice shouted at him, "Kreegan Wucrane! Get up right this moment. I didn't raise a quitter." He opened his eyes, and simultaneously, a thought flashed in his mind that if he gave up, his parents would be sad. He began swimming with all his might and managed to reach the surface.

The piece of wood he was standing on was about 5 meters away, and he started to stroke with all his might, but the distance was closing very slowly. His little arms were starting to get sluggish with exhaustion, but he couldn't give up now. His father didn't raise a quitter. After a few minutes of struggle, he had managed to climb back onto the piece of wood, completely exhausted, even though the splinters stinging in his hands, which were holding on to the wood with all his might. They hurt him very much, but he would not let go of this wood.

Another day had passed. His lips began to crack and bleed from thirst and the sea's salt. The occasional waves crashed on his face, and salt burned his lips like fire. For the first time, he realized that hunger is a painful thing. It was as if his stomach was grinding itself, and he didn't even have the energy to move his fingers.

For a moment, his eyes caught a glimpse of his father's watch on his wrist. While on board the ship, Kreegan was bored and was beginning to overwhelm his parents. He was constantly asking, "are we there yet?" his father was not angry with him and had taken off his watch and taught Kreegan how to read the time and said that they would reach there when the hour hand, which had just passed 12, came back to 12 again. Recalling this memory, Kreegan brought his other hand to that watch and started chanting in his mind." I will not give up." All he could do was hold on.

.......

A fishing boat was happily returning home after a good haul. Wiping the sweat from his forehead, he watched the sun begin to set over the horizon. No matter how many times he saw it, this sight always affected him like the first day and wiped all the tiredness of the day from his mind. This view was one of the only reasons he fell in love with the sea. Just as he was about to get on to the helm, a glint caught his eye and disappeared. This repeated a few more times, and the fisherman called out to his companions.

"Somebody get me the binoculars quick."

Another fisherman brought the collapsible binoculars and looked toward the spot where the glow came from. When the glimmer caught his eye once more, he saw where it was coming from and looked there through the binoculars.

"There is a castaway turn to the port side."

A few minutes later, one of the fishermen jumped into the water and took the unconscious Kreegan aboard.

"He must have been at sea for a few days, judging by this poor boy's state." The fishing captain turned to the others and said.

"Ryomachi brings me a blanket; Kamesago wet a clean cloth with drinking water and bring it to me." The fishermen wrapped Kreegan in a blanket, trying to raise his body temperature, then rubbed the wet cloth over his lips, causing him to drink little by little as he swallowed. A few hours later, they reached their village and took the unconscious boy to the village elder's house.

"Did you run into anyone else, or did you see any shipwrecks?"

"We made a wide circle of a few kilometers a few times but didn't run into anyone else. Judging by the way the boy was, he had been dragged by the currents for a long time."

"The last storm was four weeks ago. That can't be why, and there's only one possibility left - the pirates."

"We should put the child in Koushirou's dojo when he wakes up. I think it would be better for the child to have other people of his age. When the marine patrol ship arrives, we ask them to take a picture of the child as a missing person."

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Ok, the idea is very interesting, but it is poorly implemented, do not be discouraged author, you said that you accept constructive criticism and this has every intention of being so, this can be improved, continue with the story, improve with practice and keep in mind what I tell you for your next FF. I clarify, I have not read all nor do I plan to do so, because I really cannot accept some of the author's decisions, I will talk about them later, but in view of the potential of this idea I decided to leave the problems that I see, with the intention that the author improve and, perhaps in the future, rewrite this story with greater coherence; In the same way, I am not going to talk about spelling because, not being a native, I could easily make a mistake. Now, it is understandable that the beginning is a bit forced, with the mixture of worlds and everything, but the writing in general is quite rough, the narration does not feel fluid, making it difficult to immerse ourself in the story, I mean, do not throw the information at us so in our faces, also sometimes it seems that you forgot to put something in or it occurred to you later, so you decide to include it as if it were a last minute addition to the plot, like the blacksmith; or I also just read that after killing the bear, the teacher deduced that it was by a sword technique, but that's said by the omniscient narrator in the crudest possible way, you could have done a little scene of Koushirou bending down and checking the cut and then being surprised at the mastery of the sword, internal chatter and all, or something like that ... My point is that is better if you don't throw us the conclusions you want us to draw, use your characters to form the idea little by little or give us the clues so that we can achieve it, the first one is very important to create the framework for the other characters skills, and for giving mysticism. Another error that I saw is how you attacked the scale of power and the physical reality of things, that is, the techniques that the MC would know do not make sense, some because they require advanced knowledge that he simply does not have or because Zoro creates them on his journey; and, at the same time, doing it like this you just delegitimized all the efforts of the rest of the swordsman in your fiction, wich make it pointless unless this is one of those lame FF of OP characters that act like chinese Young Masters; and the blacksmith thing destroy the logic of your story! It's the reason why DXD is an absolute joke, there's no effort in half of their characters; which brings me to the last and worst mistake, empathy, you tried to make us empathize with the main character through a traumatic past, and it was not that bad, crude, yes, but the idea was there, but there was no growth period or anything, you didn't give us time to appreciate his situation and growth, preventing a true empathy with your character. And let's not even talk about the casual modifications to the time line, that some do it in series like Naruto, Fairy Tail or DB where the time line is poorly planned and as long as you keep certain immovable nodes everything works, it can work, just if they keep it in a decent explanatory order, but in a story like One Piece where the attention to detail is so high? It doesn't make sense, and it's too big a risk for the mere convenience of your wishes author. In any case, in summary: Narrative, character development, balance, and be coherent with the origin story and the theme of your novel.

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