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Machine God of the Multiverse

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Reborn as the brother Sam Witwicky, Luke Witwicky desired to stand above all humans, will he be able to? what decision will he make? side with the Autobots and save humanity or will the Decepticons have peace in our time

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This was completely made as a side project so don't get your hopes up for a long daily storyline novel, now here will be some clear rules that the story will follow.

*1 The Bumblebee movie will be considered non-canon to the storyline.

*2 Transformers: The Last Knight Scene where Bumblebee and some other Transformer fights against the Germans is considered NON CANON! I will accept the fact that the Cybertronian Knights did appear on Earth and helped the humans and that's just pushing it.

*3 MC will be in a serious relationship with Mikaela Banes aka Megan Fox's character as she was one of if not the most useful female character in the whole Transformer series.

*4 MC will be three years older than Sam and will be a high ranking officer in the US Army with the possibility of being the director of N.E.S.T. and will be in the superior of William Lennox and his men while also being good friends.

*5 The MC will slowly become more and more machine as time goes on, also he will travel to other worlds but will only shortly stay in the Terminator world as the timeline is already f*cked.

please voice out your opinions if you can come up with better rules or you wish to argue about them.

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Writing Quality- 2 stars Stability of updates- 3 stars Story Development- 2stars Character design - 2 World background- 2 The grammar is bad, spelling is so-so. Barely readable unless you double check. The author needs to practice about English vocabulary and download Grammarly to further improve your story. Stability of updates is so-so or wreck. Sometimes there's an update, sometimes not. Now for the story development. The Character improvements isn't even written and to much unnecessary information dump is being written. Wasting a lot of space and the time skip is just horrible as a lot of potential wasted and he didn't do anything productive besides relying on luck. At least he use common sense. All the characters from jojo and his minions are nerfed. Wisdom and Intellect wise. The interaction feels force coupled with horrendous grammar made my eyes itch. Character design. I don't wanna talk about it. It's no different from your mediocre Gamer fic coupled with Cliché ness and kinda naive. Then again. He doesn't have much problem. World background. He written... well... nothing. No political talking nor architecture and culture etc. Its basically nonexistent alonf with confusing tyime skip that has no excuses leave a lot of conundrum. There's more of it but im to lazy to write. Now. The Jojo world isn't powerful because of their Raw power. Rather its because of their Intellect that have such imagination along with their analytical mind made them them. The Mc isn't that smart nor wise on my opinion. Rather an arrogant man filled with arrogance because of his power. Forgetting the fact that several weaker stands can cause him trouble or kill him at all. He act high and mighty and all. Plot is nonexistent. Not different from the original. There are more I want to talk but my fingers are tired pleasuring my phone as it vibrate you see. Ps : If you found something wrong in my comment please do say something and please make it believable or something like that. I lost quite a lot of brain cells whenever I encounter blabbering fan boys. ( not this mind you. ) And i see potential yet the execution is just... horrendous. Also don't delete this otherwise how'd you improve?

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