Kido System in Bleach

the mc is stupid .and he is talking too much .

The MC make dumb choices, basically MC is stupid. Also MC sounds like a child in every way. Why doesn't the system explain each of the ten kido, an even if that's ok then MC should have experimented each one in detail. This is only getting two stars because you can read this an bleach is one of my favorites.

incongruous in the case of the story it seems that he never read the manga or saw the bleach anime, the mc acts like a 3 year old child not like someone his age who is supposed to have read a lot of manga, the rating is going to be low until he edits it and makes a better story

why's the mc like that? if it's a kido system I'd assume they're atleast somewhat smart/mature

The Mc is probably the dumbest ive seen in a long time when rukia first met ichigo and fights the hallow the mc goes out of his way to show off and use kido infront of both of them then says 10 mins later that he hopes rukia doesn't find out he can use kido then when they go to school the next day he ends up wondering why they have questions and how they know he did it like he has no accountability

The reviews here are all very wrong, from what i have seen this is actually decent, I like the system and I like the character interactions, everyone is acting like their canon counterparts, from what ive seen I think mcs personality is a bit too childish for a world like bleach but since i see the other reviews its clear that many of them havent read up to ch 20, and i am not expecting them too the beginning was quite frustrating, but then again the mc attitude makes alot of sense, I mean did you expect an everyday otaku who gets reborn in one of his favorite anime to all of a sudden be a sart calculating blood thirsty emo dude? If possible I find him funny, the mc shows his excitement all up in your face, so my fellow reviewers review should be invalid, I recommend giving it a try and ignore the bad reviews.

The story reads as a friend, stoned out of his mind is trying his very best to retell a story he half remembers

friend, I'll be honest with you, the premise of the story is very good, but the execution leaves something to be desired, the personality of the MC is something to work on, because with a Kido system I would expect someone more intelligent, I also expected it to just be used from Kido to Zampakuto kind of disappointed me, also something more personal but I honestly found him very gullible knowing how the world of Bleach is even knowing Urahara I would hardly trust him much, there is a lot to improve in the story but the potential if executed well is Great, I recommend writing a few more chapters and then rewriting the story and fixing your mistakes.

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The overall story was nice and I understand why the MC is making such choices because obviously he's an amateur but overall the story is progressing somewhat well

Honestly the MC is so cringe I could barely stop myself from facepalming in every paragraph. Although it seems like in this AU Ichigo is happier and more like an actual teen, which I like, the cringyness of the MC kinda ruins this novel.

How to say this... It's like every chapter so far is written as an introductory chapter, setting up hype but never delivering. I honestly haven't come across this before. Maybe going 3rd person would have benefited the story from chapter 2 onwards. Otherwise, it's an interesting idea. I haven't seen another fic that was kido focused. I'll give it another go but if progression doesn't smooth out soon, I'll be moving on.

Well at least it has a decent synopsis compared to other fanfics

Author how you write is cringy and childish this is by far the worst main character i have read and I can already see that the store development going to be trash the character design is childish.