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NowGoWithTheFlow
NowGoWithTheFlowLv141yr
2023-09-11 01:28

The MC make dumb choices, basically MC is stupid. Also MC sounds like a child in every way. Why doesn't the system explain each of the ten kido, an even if that's ok then MC should have experimented each one in detail. This is only getting two stars because you can read this an bleach is one of my favorites.

Kido System in Bleach

ridhibrata_das
2.6
40 Chs

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ridhibrata_das
ridhibrata_dasAuthor

He is just still not used to the new world he is in, and the system will explain each Kido after they are used, and the mc can't just experiment captain level Kido in his backyard or somewhere, it will cause major destruction

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Zariel_aod
Zariel_aodLv4

The system is not explainedl well … i mean some give explanations before using the ability but thats fine … he is a bit immature but when we look at bleach as a whole the students around ichigo are definitely immature n weird so its fine … the mc is quite funny with his antics but his thought process needs work

ridhibrata_das:He is just still not used to the new world he is in, and the system will explain each Kido after they are used, and the mc can't just experiment captain level Kido in his backyard or somewhere, it will cause major destruction
1yr
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ridhibrata_das
ridhibrata_dasAuthor

I am intentionally not explaining the system fully as it will have a great significance in later parts of the story🙂

Zariel_aod:The system is not explainedl well … i mean some give explanations before using the ability but thats fine … he is a bit immature but when we look at bleach as a whole the students around ichigo are definitely immature n weird so its fine … the mc is quite funny with his antics but his thought process needs work
1yr
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Binolin_Pubg
Binolin_PubgLv13

the mc is stupid .and he is talking too much .

1yr

greencross
greencrossLv10

incongruous in the case of the story it seems that he never read the manga or saw the bleach anime, the mc acts like a 3 year old child not like someone his age who is supposed to have read a lot of manga, the rating is going to be low until he edits it and makes a better story

1yr
Donworry
DonworryLv4

why's the mc like that? if it's a kido system I'd assume they're atleast somewhat smart/mature

1yr
antmanFN
antmanFNLv13

The Mc is probably the dumbest ive seen in a long time when rukia first met ichigo and fights the hallow the mc goes out of his way to show off and use kido infront of both of them then says 10 mins later that he hopes rukia doesn't find out he can use kido then when they go to school the next day he ends up wondering why they have questions and how they know he did it like he has no accountability

1yr
Vastoking
VastokingLv6

The reviews here are all very wrong, from what i have seen this is actually decent, I like the system and I like the character interactions, everyone is acting like their canon counterparts, from what ive seen I think mcs personality is a bit too childish for a world like bleach but since i see the other reviews its clear that many of them havent read up to ch 20, and i am not expecting them too the beginning was quite frustrating, but then again the mc attitude makes alot of sense, I mean did you expect an everyday otaku who gets reborn in one of his favorite anime to all of a sudden be a sart calculating blood thirsty emo dude? If possible I find him funny, the mc shows his excitement all up in your face, so my fellow reviewers review should be invalid, I recommend giving it a try and ignore the bad reviews.

1yr
xSaintPablo
xSaintPabloLv14

The story reads as a friend, stoned out of his mind is trying his very best to retell a story he half remembers

1yr
Ozem
OzemLv2

friend, I'll be honest with you, the premise of the story is very good, but the execution leaves something to be desired, the personality of the MC is something to work on, because with a Kido system I would expect someone more intelligent, I also expected it to just be used from Kido to Zampakuto kind of disappointed me, also something more personal but I honestly found him very gullible knowing how the world of Bleach is even knowing Urahara I would hardly trust him much, there is a lot to improve in the story but the potential if executed well is Great, I recommend writing a few more chapters and then rewriting the story and fixing your mistakes.

1yr
WaitWhoWhat
WaitWhoWhatLv14

Reveal spoiler

1yr
LEONARD_CALUMPANG
LEONARD_CALUMPANGLv4

The overall story was nice and I understand why the MC is making such choices because obviously he's an amateur but overall the story is progressing somewhat well

1yr
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