Just Another Chat Group

God, it's horrible. It's like two hours of poetry from a self-deprecating teenager. I understand that he's a teenager, and I get that he's in Severus's body, but please, kill me. I can summarize the story as: "I am Severus, I am horrible for hurting my Lily. Why don't you love me? My heart is with you forever, but I will never be with you, and that makes my heart not beat." It's like a marathon of secondhand embarrassment. I like drama, but not so poorly done. I don't know if that changes in the future; I hope it does. Good luck to anyone brave enough to read it.

It would be a better story if the mc was not a simp that can't move on from someone else's feelings. Most beginning chapters are of him crying about his feeling. Could not make it to the chat group cause mc did not emotionally evolve out of simping or even try to control his feelings.

Good and interesting. mc is transmigrated as severus snape during the lily falling out incident. seems like this will be harem instead of just severus x lily. not that I have any problems with that

This story is just pure embarrassment. If Snape being such a simp for Lily in the early chapters turned you away, then you know nothing. Because the story only gets worse with time. Snape eventually stops simping for Lily only to start simping x100 harder for Ashley, a character from the chat group and a psychopathic bro-con yandere from a different universe. He will even bully all other chat members because Ashley wants to. There are many other problems with this ff, but the one mentioned above is the main one.

one of the best fanfic pls don't drop it

Well everyone has their tastes, personally it made me want to vomit. Not the story. I'm talking about the MC. ....,.........................

Starts off strong the group chat doen’t come untill like chapter 10 but everything feels very organic, maybe starts a bit too emo like but it’s interesting for a character to have a flaw even if some people will not like it, can’t wait for more.

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Just the way the chat group was introduced had me hooked. Great flow of writing id love if he obsessed over lily less or even get over her but you are the author and i respect your work the story so far has been great ..love it... keep up the good work 💪💯

Now it's started to get better now that he's stopped being a simp, I just hope there's no more drama from Lily, I really don't know if I would like her to end up with Potter in the end, after all, regardless of her being an idiot who prefers ruining Snape's life to save others, Potter was still the cause of their friendship ending

this is in my top 10 fanfictions (I've easily read over 500) and to everybody whining that he can't magically give up an obsession that was his literal lifeline and calling him a simp the author handled the situation beautifully, in short

so far it's a good story and a nice way how he got his system keep up te good work

It has taken nearly 50 chapters for the MC to get over his weird obsession over Lily which is pretty stupid. Keep in mind that this is supposed to be about a guy possessing Severus but it honestly doesn’t feel like a self insert. I’m surprised people are actually praising this book since he has been constantly crying, making the same mistakes and just being pathetic in general. Wouldn’t recommend this at all.

Some people in the reviews really don't know what they are talking about, the first chapters are really on point of how a obsessed person can act and think. Snape knows that he is being unreasonable, and he knows that what he does is pathetic and disgusting but he cant stop himself from feeling all that and the story explains it very well. Anyways, he got over her at the latest chapters after his eyes were opened. So, if you were like me who look to the reviews first to see if the novels is good enough to read, give it a chance because I wasn't disappointed.

I am both satisfied and not🤣, I've finally caught up to chap 20 and it landed on a cliffy though not that steep hahahaha. So now on to my Review, First coming in to this story i didn't really expect much as i just accedentally pressed read so I just went ahead and read it. After a few chaps in I was curious about where the chat group was but found myself not caring about it as i was already hooked with the story 🤣, it really drew me in so thanks for the wonderful read!! ps. lastly I don't really get those not liking him being a simp, but isn't he having the memories of snape so his actions are quite reasonable and is explained well by the author and if they continued reading I think they'd be quite satisfied with the mc's growth👌 pps. last lastly hahahaa I was surprised about the chat group finally appearing 🤣 I thought I accidentally pressed a different story hahahahaah ppps. I tried to talk about as little as i can about the story so those reading this won't be spoiled so to those reading this review give this fic a read why don't cha! bye👋

Bro … I’m actually surprised. I’ve been looking for something like this for ages now. Great concept and amazing storyline. I only wish you could speed up the release a bit more. No worries tho one chapter a day is good enough.

Sometimes the simping is a bit much, but in time it goes away. Besides that it’s a great novel with long chapters .

New review after chapter 18. Snape finally decided to dump the idea of lily. Everyone knows lily is garbage and that now includes NotARealSnape. He is no longer simping so yeah.

sinceramente me gusto mucho como iba a la historia pero ya cuando fue la primera misión y tenían que elegir quien iba parece que el MC paso de ser la perra de lily a la perra de Ashley porque le hace caso en absolutamente todo y digo todo!!!!!! es patético este mc