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Venerable_SCP_1915
Venerable_SCP_1915Lv41yr
2024-03-01 14:11

this is in my top 10 fanfictions (I've easily read over 500) and to everybody whining that he can't magically give up an obsession that was his literal lifeline and calling him a simp the author handled the situation beautifully, in short

Just Another Chat Group

IHaveHidden
3.8
77 Chs

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Jack_Slash
Jack_SlashLv1

Lol, he literally magically gave up on his obsession with Lily and began simping for the author's new waifu Ashley.

1yr
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Venerable_SCP_1915
Venerable_SCP_1915Lv4

someone doesn't know what the term simp means

Jack_Slash:Lol, he literally magically gave up on his obsession with Lily and began simping for the author's new waifu Ashley.
1yr
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Jack_Slash
Jack_SlashLv1

Yeah, I figured out that you don't know the meaning of some words.

Venerable_SCP_1915:someone doesn't know what the term simp means
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1yr
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SalveYing
SalveYingLv11

God, it's horrible. It's like two hours of poetry from a self-deprecating teenager. I understand that he's a teenager, and I get that he's in Severus's body, but please, kill me. I can summarize the story as: "I am Severus, I am horrible for hurting my Lily. Why don't you love me? My heart is with you forever, but I will never be with you, and that makes my heart not beat." It's like a marathon of secondhand embarrassment. I like drama, but not so poorly done. I don't know if that changes in the future; I hope it does. Good luck to anyone brave enough to read it.

1yr

Daoistunderlord
DaoistunderlordLv14

It would be a better story if the mc was not a simp that can't move on from someone else's feelings. Most beginning chapters are of him crying about his feeling. Could not make it to the chat group cause mc did not emotionally evolve out of simping or even try to control his feelings.

1yr
Isak_Svartrapmo
Isak_SvartrapmoLv4

Good and interesting. mc is transmigrated as severus snape during the lily falling out incident. seems like this will be harem instead of just severus x lily. not that I have any problems with that

1yr
Jack_Slash
Jack_SlashLv1

This story is just pure embarrassment. If Snape being such a simp for Lily in the early chapters turned you away, then you know nothing. Because the story only gets worse with time. Snape eventually stops simping for Lily only to start simping x100 harder for Ashley, a character from the chat group and a psychopathic bro-con yandere from a different universe. He will even bully all other chat members because Ashley wants to. There are many other problems with this ff, but the one mentioned above is the main one.

1yr
_D_OMNINOMAD
_D_OMNINOMADLv4

one of the best fanfic pls don't drop it

1yr
Ometecuhtli
OmetecuhtliLv2

Well everyone has their tastes, personally it made me want to vomit. Not the story. I'm talking about the MC. ....,.........................

1yr
Greenmatsui
GreenmatsuiLv13

Starts off strong the group chat doen’t come untill like chapter 10 but everything feels very organic, maybe starts a bit too emo like but it’s interesting for a character to have a flaw even if some people will not like it, can’t wait for more.

1yr
KoRo
KoRoLv5

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TheAbsolution
TheAbsolutionLv4

Just the way the chat group was introduced had me hooked. Great flow of writing id love if he obsessed over lily less or even get over her but you are the author and i respect your work the story so far has been great ..love it... keep up the good work 💪💯

1yr
mistOrange
mistOrangeLv1

Simple MC, Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC, Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC, Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC, Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC!!!![img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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