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BLatman
BLatmanLv410mth
2024-02-24 12:04

Sometimes the simping is a bit much, but in time it goes away. Besides that it’s a great novel with long chapters .

Just Another Chat Group

IHaveHidden
3.8
74 Chs

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SalveYing
SalveYingLv11

God, it's horrible. It's like two hours of poetry from a self-deprecating teenager. I understand that he's a teenager, and I get that he's in Severus's body, but please, kill me. I can summarize the story as: "I am Severus, I am horrible for hurting my Lily. Why don't you love me? My heart is with you forever, but I will never be with you, and that makes my heart not beat." It's like a marathon of secondhand embarrassment. I like drama, but not so poorly done. I don't know if that changes in the future; I hope it does. Good luck to anyone brave enough to read it.

10mth

Daoistunderlord
DaoistunderlordLv14

It would be a better story if the mc was not a simp that can't move on from someone else's feelings. Most beginning chapters are of him crying about his feeling. Could not make it to the chat group cause mc did not emotionally evolve out of simping or even try to control his feelings.

10mth
Isak_Svartrapmo
Isak_SvartrapmoLv4

Good and interesting. mc is transmigrated as severus snape during the lily falling out incident. seems like this will be harem instead of just severus x lily. not that I have any problems with that

10mth
Jack_Slash
Jack_SlashLv1

This story is just pure embarrassment. If Snape being such a simp for Lily in the early chapters turned you away, then you know nothing. Because the story only gets worse with time. Snape eventually stops simping for Lily only to start simping x100 harder for Ashley, a character from the chat group and a psychopathic bro-con yandere from a different universe. He will even bully all other chat members because Ashley wants to. There are many other problems with this ff, but the one mentioned above is the main one.

10mth
_D_OMNINOMAD
_D_OMNINOMADLv4

one of the best fanfic pls don't drop it

10mth
Ometecuhtli
OmetecuhtliLv2

Well everyone has their tastes, personally it made me want to vomit. Not the story. I'm talking about the MC. ....,.........................

10mth
Greenmatsui
GreenmatsuiLv13

Starts off strong the group chat doen’t come untill like chapter 10 but everything feels very organic, maybe starts a bit too emo like but it’s interesting for a character to have a flaw even if some people will not like it, can’t wait for more.

10mth
KoRo
KoRoLv5

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10mth
mistOrange
mistOrangeLv1

Simple MC, Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC, Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC, Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC, Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC,Simple MC!!!![img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

10mth
TheAbsolution
TheAbsolutionLv4

Just the way the chat group was introduced had me hooked. Great flow of writing id love if he obsessed over lily less or even get over her but you are the author and i respect your work the story so far has been great ..love it... keep up the good work 💪💯

10mth
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