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In the Novel World

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What is In the Novel World

Đọc tiểu thuyết In the Novel World của tác giả Dark_Sider321 được xuất bản trên WebNovel.April 1,2023A boy can be seen in an empty class as he is looking out the window. The whole classroom is enveloped in peaceful silence but the same can’t said about the outside. A “ONCE” beautiful girl...

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April 1,2023 A boy can be seen in an empty class as he is looking out the window. The whole classroom is enveloped in peaceful silence but the same can’t said about the outside. A “ONCE” beautiful girl is being apprehended by the law enforcement and the people around her is giving her a disgusted look. The boy is seeing everything from the second floor of their school building. No emotion can be detected from his face apart from a calm smile. After seeing the police cars left the school premise, he quietly left the classroom. Nobody can tell from his expression that the girl who is being taken by the police is his so-called “GIRLFRIEND”. \ \ \ \ \ It is my first-time writing novel and I don’t have much experience about writing. English my third language and I am not very good at it. So, you guys will find a ton of grammatical or other mistakes. But I will try to improve my writing quality over time. It will of great help if you guys can give me your honest opinion in the comment section. I know there will a lot of criticism because of my writing quality but please keep it in check because it’s not a pleasant feeling to hear people talk crap about someone’s work even if that work isn’t good. Last but not least Enjoy my novel!

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The Girl from Hell

King Lucifer, the Mayor of Hell had a new idea: to send Princess Dalucy, his only daughter, to the land of the Aliens and Mortals to reign and catch cruise! The King hated the rumbles in his harem of a thousand Queens, and Dorab, his last Queen and mother of Princess Dalucy was as hated by the other queens as much as she enthralled him with her dazzling beauty. The King called her his "Inamorata" and the other queens envied her the more! They schemed endlessly, waiting for an opportunity to push her into Hades Zamour, the part of hell where King Lucifer relished anything that burnt there! He often said, "if anything gets to Hades Zamour, let it burn and give me pleasure!" However, to get past an army of a thousand warrior urchins and get hold of Queen Doreb was a nightmare that the other queens dared not imagine. For Queen Doreb, her nightmares had begun, and worsened when King Lucifer singled her out of the dead mortals awaiting purgatory and fell in love with her. All hell went loose! She became an instant rave of the moment. King Lucifer never looked at the Gate of Purgatory. He called the inmates, "stupid half righteous souls, neither here nor there ." He chose his queens straight from the Condemned, those judged and sent to Hades Furious Flames. Then Queen Doreb's wedding was the talk of hell! On that day, Prince Death was the chief host of the event! To have Prince Death to chair an event in Hell was a major achievement for King Lucifer. A grand wedding, with all the trappings of royalty, Earth stood still. No death was recorded there because the captain himself was busy in Hell. To break the camel's back, Queen Doreb swallowed King Lucifer's love seed and bore him his only Princess amidst 7million Princess! The other queens were inconsolable, and all negative vibes shifted to the Princess whose eyes dazzled in all parts of Hades and gave illumination to that hitherto dark part of Hell. "She is Princess Dalucy. She will rule in the affairs of mortal men. The idea is coming!" And the idea finally came!

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Rohan_Shinde_2731
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It has a different start from other books, which I find very interesting and very promising, and am looking forward to reading more of it.

Kw0z
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Your synopsis is pretty bad. It doesn’t really give me any info on the story, thus making readers not want to read it.

Bananalover20
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my mother language is not English so I am not so good at it....I like the fact that the author is using common words which is quite understandable.

unknowndude567
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I am a sucker for mystery and the last chapter gave me a mysterious vibe....so I guess its not so bad for a new novel.

Deternitydude
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the beginning is pretty good it's setting the personality for the mc and what to kind of expect ncc

Joseph_Gomes_1373
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I suppose the beginning isn't so horrible, and the English is more legible than in other novels. I hope to see more of you in the future.

Deciduous_B0ltling
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I’ve read till ch 26, which is the latest currently and is on hiatus cuz of author’s finals. The beginning was interesting. But after the transmigration, most things were quite similar to the Webnovel ‘No More Pain For This Villain’. My suggestion to the author: differentiate your novel from that one as much and as soon as possible (while you have changed minor plot currently along with names and appearances of characters and places, that is not enough). Also, I don’t like novels with the harem tag, but I’ll give this a shot. I’d recommend to minimise the significance of the harem to the plot or at least make it so there’s only 2-3 members of the harem and they don’t instantly fall for him for some illogical reason; make the whole thing realistic.

ZaHagag
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Tiết lộ người tiết lộ thông tin

Maverick_sfx
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#tragedy tag is a must in this novel, so some might not like it

Karnann
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when will you upload next chapter ? author I am waiting

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