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In One Piece As Technoblade

Tác giả: Pheonix_2005
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  • 27 ch
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  • 3.6
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  • NO.200+
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Dave was dying. One day he was streaming minecraft and the next he was diagnosed with cancer in the middle of a pandemic. And boy, cancer was annoying. Regular visits to the hospital and less time playing minecraft. Cancer was also a bitch as it had decided to kill him. So now he wasn't "The God Of MC", he wasn't "The Blood God" Technoblade, now he was Dave and he was dead. "Your lucky y'know." Said the mysterious voice in the void. "Your getting reincarnated but to where i don't know as that the wheel decides" It says as A wheel with many names appears infront of me. "HEH!!!"" None of the characters belong to me. All characters are property of their respective owners All Art used belongs to the wonderful artists who drew the images and are not mine

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so i like techno and one piece so 4 stars there are big problems wich most of the time i would drop the novel for it but this has stuff that i like a lot so read it to 11 chaps that are out as of this review 4.readable, but not the best. 5.dont know 3.the 5 wishes make no sense and are just stupid. the whole interaction is stupid. techno using his wish and the angle like well you also wished for a system so im just going to put it there and not give it to you cause the author said he cant be to op. like the angel changes the wishes. and the person wishing it is not even a person it just feels like someone controlling him to make those wishes. 4. characters are pretty good, but techno just feels kinda wired, going under luffy is kinda stupid in my opinion, but it looks good at 11 chaps, but still conflict with technos freedom. ace would have been better. 5.world background well it's one piece what else the islands original and the way they get there actually makes sense cause they could have gone just not mentioned.. so a thing that definitely should be changed is the 5 wishes it makes 0 sense, the second wish i get, but the others are just the author wanting a techno in onepiece just feels unnatural. just make it into like 1 wish and he gets the technoblade system or something its still stupid , but more bearable or he just wakes up there like that. so just my opinion that could have been better is him joining ace if he needed to join anyone. the best would have been him being a free spirit and just going randomly from place to place.

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