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9Satan
9SatanLv22yr
2022-01-26 11:57

Your ancestors fought year after year in the bitter jungle. For hundreds if not thousands of years they adapted and evolved, battling both disease and beast, and reigning triumphant! And for what? What was the ends of this survival? So their descendant could write a fanfic about some geeky minecraft player in an anime? How are you this much of a loser? You aren't even willing to write a self insert, but you write about an e-celeb.. dude.. do you have any self awareness at all? Do you even realize how much of a loser you look like?

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Solomolecule
SolomoleculeLv14

ok I don't know who technoblade is nut why does it make you so mad

9Satan
9SatanLv2

Oh? How did you get the emotion of anger out of my philosophical essay? I feel no anger towards e-celebs, I just believe writing a fanfic about them is something only a supreme loser would do. At least write a self insert.

Solomolecule:ok I don't know who technoblade is nut why does it make you so mad
Solomolecule
SolomoleculeLv14

oh ok I was just wondering where your distaste towards it came from is he like corpse husband or xqc Orr berleezy or something since you said e celeb

9Satan:Oh? How did you get the emotion of anger out of my philosophical essay? I feel no anger towards e-celebs, I just believe writing a fanfic about them is something only a supreme loser would do. At least write a self insert.
9Satan
9SatanLv2

Yikes.. you sound like a loser as well. I don't know who he is, I just searched his name up because he's in the name of this fanfic. Why can't you do something so simple as well?

Solomolecule:oh ok I was just wondering where your distaste towards it came from is he like corpse husband or xqc Orr berleezy or something since you said e celeb
Solomolecule
SolomoleculeLv14

so, if someone watches twitch streamers they are a loser, welp I'm not gonna stop watching imdontai but you do you and I didn't really care who the person was enough to search him up I was just wondering why you were so hostile to him

9Satan:Yikes.. you sound like a loser as well. I don't know who he is, I just searched his name up because he's in the name of this fanfic. Why can't you do something so simple as well?
9Satan
9SatanLv2

Thank god this loser is finally realizing how beneath me he is and stopped replying. Do you know how embarrassed I feel right now, having had a conversation with a nerd such as yourself? The disgust I feel is not something your small brain could comprehend. SCRAM!

Solomolecule:so, if someone watches twitch streamers they are a loser, welp I'm not gonna stop watching imdontai but you do you and I didn't really care who the person was enough to search him up I was just wondering why you were so hostile to him
Solomolecule
SolomoleculeLv14

ok now I get it, you're trolling

9Satan:Thank god this loser is finally realizing how beneath me he is and stopped replying. Do you know how embarrassed I feel right now, having had a conversation with a nerd such as yourself? The disgust I feel is not something your small brain could comprehend. SCRAM!
Aburama
AburamaLv14

either you're trolling or a cringe edgelord lol

9Satan:Thank god this loser is finally realizing how beneath me he is and stopped replying. Do you know how embarrassed I feel right now, having had a conversation with a nerd such as yourself? The disgust I feel is not something your small brain could comprehend. SCRAM!
9Satan
9SatanLv2

Why are you interrupting my conversations? Are you this starved for attention? Fang Yuan would be embarrassed to have such a disgrace using his visage as a profile picture. Scram.

Aburama:either you're trolling or a cringe edgelord lol
Aburama
AburamaLv14

lol I guess you kinda gotta be an edgy teen when your name is satan lol get a life and go touch some grass you snot-nosed little loser using big words because you think it makes you sound intelligent and look cool absolutely laughable go take a shower for once you greasy nerd

9Satan:Why are you interrupting my conversations? Are you this starved for attention? Fang Yuan would be embarrassed to have such a disgrace using his visage as a profile picture. Scram.
9Satan
9SatanLv2

Another person who used the insult "touch grass." You're the third person. What does this buzzword even mean? So cringe.

Aburama:lol I guess you kinda gotta be an edgy teen when your name is satan lol get a life and go touch some grass you snot-nosed little loser using big words because you think it makes you sound intelligent and look cool absolutely laughable go take a shower for once you greasy nerd
Aburama
AburamaLv14

for someone that uses big words to look smart you sure arent very bright it means exactly what it says, go outside for once instead of scrolling through the internet all day pretending like you're some intellectual above the masses because it couldn't be further from the truth you cringy little dweeb

9Satan:Another person who used the insult "touch grass." You're the third person. What does this buzzword even mean? So cringe.
9Satan
9SatanLv2

What word have I used that's considered "big" by you? I made sure to tone down my sagacious lexicon and use simple words for you simple-minded peons, and yet they're still too "big" for you? That's... quite sad.

Aburama:for someone that uses big words to look smart you sure arent very bright it means exactly what it says, go outside for once instead of scrolling through the internet all day pretending like you're some intellectual above the masses because it couldn't be further from the truth you cringy little dweeb
Aburama
AburamaLv14

never said they were too big for me just pointed out that you liked to use them to make yourself either feel cool or smart as exhibited by this comment nice reach tho too bad you still came a little short like your little friend downstairs That's... quite sad.

9Satan:What word have I used that's considered "big" by you? I made sure to tone down my sagacious lexicon and use simple words for you simple-minded peons, and yet they're still too "big" for you? That's... quite sad.
9Satan
9SatanLv2

Sigh. We're from the same country, and yet our grammar is worlds apart. I honestly thought you were from some Sub-Saharan African country with your terrible grammar, but the fact that we're actually from the same country is quite crushing. I can only hope you are a basket-case, if the rest of the young generation is as stupid as you we're doomed. I've literally spoken with Apes from the Congo that have a greater grasp over the English lexicon, yours is on the level of Indians. Sigh.

Aburama: never said they were too big for me just pointed out that you liked to use them to make yourself either feel cool or smart as exhibited by this comment nice reach tho too bad you still came a little short like your little friend downstairs That's... quite sad.
Aburama
AburamaLv14

I can't help but think you're mentally damaged reading what you just said lol get a life you worthless piece of garbage, it's funny that you call me part of the "young generation" as if you yourself aren't some 12-year-old edge lord getting high off of pretending to be superior to strangers on the internet

9Satan:Sigh. We're from the same country, and yet our grammar is worlds apart. I honestly thought you were from some Sub-Saharan African country with your terrible grammar, but the fact that we're actually from the same country is quite crushing. I can only hope you are a basket-case, if the rest of the young generation is as stupid as you we're doomed. I've literally spoken with Apes from the Congo that have a greater grasp over the English lexicon, yours is on the level of Indians. Sigh.
9Satan
9SatanLv2

You keep repeating the same things over and over again. I'm mentally damaged? Uh.. didn't you insult me first? I'm not allowed to defend myself, or I'm mentally damaged? Where does this arrogance come from? Aren't you the "young master" archetype here, messing with the protagonist who's just minding his own business? Now you're above being insulted? Your lack of self awareness is amusing.

Aburama:I can't help but think you're mentally damaged reading what you just said lol get a life you worthless piece of garbage, it's funny that you call me part of the "young generation" as if you yourself aren't some 12-year-old edge lord getting high off of pretending to be superior to strangers on the internet
DarkArcanist
DarkArcanistLv4

ooh, racist American, didn't expect your species to still exist

9Satan:You keep repeating the same things over and over again. I'm mentally damaged? Uh.. didn't you insult me first? I'm not allowed to defend myself, or I'm mentally damaged? Where does this arrogance come from? Aren't you the "young master" archetype here, messing with the protagonist who's just minding his own business? Now you're above being insulted? Your lack of self awareness is amusing.
Aburama
AburamaLv14

You comparing yourself to a protagonist minding his own business shows the lack of self-awareness on your part when you are literally going from comment section to comment section starting fights for no real reason at all if anyone here has young master syndrome it's you now SCRAM!

9Satan:You keep repeating the same things over and over again. I'm mentally damaged? Uh.. didn't you insult me first? I'm not allowed to defend myself, or I'm mentally damaged? Where does this arrogance come from? Aren't you the "young master" archetype here, messing with the protagonist who's just minding his own business? Now you're above being insulted? Your lack of self awareness is amusing.
9Satan
9SatanLv2

How do you know about that? Did you.. perhaps... read through my comment history? That's gonna be a yikes from me, dawg. That's a level of creepiness I don't want to imagine.

Aburama:You comparing yourself to a protagonist minding his own business shows the lack of self-awareness on your part when you are literally going from comment section to comment section starting fights for no real reason at all if anyone here has young master syndrome it's you now SCRAM!
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FatHitler
FatHitlerLv12

so i like techno and one piece so 4 stars there are big problems wich most of the time i would drop the novel for it but this has stuff that i like a lot so read it to 11 chaps that are out as of this review 4.readable, but not the best. 5.dont know 3.the 5 wishes make no sense and are just stupid. the whole interaction is stupid. techno using his wish and the angle like well you also wished for a system so im just going to put it there and not give it to you cause the author said he cant be to op. like the angel changes the wishes. and the person wishing it is not even a person it just feels like someone controlling him to make those wishes. 4. characters are pretty good, but techno just feels kinda wired, going under luffy is kinda stupid in my opinion, but it looks good at 11 chaps, but still conflict with technos freedom. ace would have been better. 5.world background well it's one piece what else the islands original and the way they get there actually makes sense cause they could have gone just not mentioned.. so a thing that definitely should be changed is the 5 wishes it makes 0 sense, the second wish i get, but the others are just the author wanting a techno in onepiece just feels unnatural. just make it into like 1 wish and he gets the technoblade system or something its still stupid , but more bearable or he just wakes up there like that. so just my opinion that could have been better is him joining ace if he needed to join anyone. the best would have been him being a free spirit and just going randomly from place to place.

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