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I_HATE_INCENT_Lv53yr
2021-12-23 18:34

well it was a good story expect for certain things like the wishes as well as choosing to be someone underling(even if it Luffy) with a that power....it just felt wrong.we are here to read about his adventure not Luffy's.

In One Piece As Technoblade

Pheonix_2005
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Pheonix_2005
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Author Review. This is my first fanfiction and was just a spur of the moment idea. I don't really know how well i'll write or how long it'll be. I also love one piece but don't know enough about it to write a complete fanfiction. So, updates may vary depending on the focus of the chapter and how much research needs to be done. Hopefully everyone who reads this enjoys the fic and if you want to you can give me feedback in the form of ideas and things i could have done different.

3yr

9Satan
9SatanLv2

Your ancestors fought year after year in the bitter jungle. For hundreds if not thousands of years they adapted and evolved, battling both disease and beast, and reigning triumphant! And for what? What was the ends of this survival? So their descendant could write a fanfic about some geeky minecraft player in an anime? How are you this much of a loser? You aren't even willing to write a self insert, but you write about an e-celeb.. dude.. do you have any self awareness at all? Do you even realize how much of a loser you look like?

3yr
SkelSmt
SkelSmtLv4

Rest In Peace Techno You may have die but you will NEVER be forgotten… Like many people you were one of the greatest YouTuber with your dark humour and positive vibe.

2yr
6SAD_BOYS_EARBUD9
6SAD_BOYS_EARBUD9Lv1

I don't even want to know what happens next. A bunch of stans infesting this site like cockroaches. what a way to see the the plague coming to this site

3yr
Frog_King
Frog_KingLv2

do i really have to explain?

3yr
Snipe_is_here
Snipe_is_hereLv3

................................ I just wanna say after the newest vid of techno I'm gonna rate this 5 star ................................

2yr
FatHitler
FatHitlerLv12

so i like techno and one piece so 4 stars there are big problems wich most of the time i would drop the novel for it but this has stuff that i like a lot so read it to 11 chaps that are out as of this review 4.readable, but not the best. 5.dont know 3.the 5 wishes make no sense and are just stupid. the whole interaction is stupid. techno using his wish and the angle like well you also wished for a system so im just going to put it there and not give it to you cause the author said he cant be to op. like the angel changes the wishes. and the person wishing it is not even a person it just feels like someone controlling him to make those wishes. 4. characters are pretty good, but techno just feels kinda wired, going under luffy is kinda stupid in my opinion, but it looks good at 11 chaps, but still conflict with technos freedom. ace would have been better. 5.world background well it's one piece what else the islands original and the way they get there actually makes sense cause they could have gone just not mentioned.. so a thing that definitely should be changed is the 5 wishes it makes 0 sense, the second wish i get, but the others are just the author wanting a techno in onepiece just feels unnatural. just make it into like 1 wish and he gets the technoblade system or something its still stupid , but more bearable or he just wakes up there like that. so just my opinion that could have been better is him joining ace if he needed to join anyone. the best would have been him being a free spirit and just going randomly from place to place.

3yr
Prunes3
Prunes3Lv2

No way this exists ..................................... ........................................

3yr
Snipe_is_here
Snipe_is_hereLv3

the story is good but what is he's technoblade abilities? ..................................................................................

3yr
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