In Naruto World With Instant Mastery Cheat

Hi guys! I am shamelessly giving myself a 5 star review coz I am shameless. Anyway I had actually written this in fanfic.net but somehow I couldn't log in and I got bored trying to write it over again so now with my renewed vigor I shall write my own awesome fanfic.

As of chapter six, this novel is a complete butchering of the original story. It's to the point where some of the characters in the original story don't exist, some who shouldn't exist, do exist. Some characters were even made up by the author himself. It feels like very little time and effort were put into in the way of plot, it feels very lacking. The story is rushed, the dialog is rushed, the main character is an asshat that cares about nothing but showing off. It's your very stereotypical harem-building/power trip wish-fulfillment fantasy novel.

I mean this novel is quite funny and a good way to pass time but guys like come on this novel getting into top 2 is actually pretty insulting for those guys who actually think about their novels carefully(not that im an author though just symphatizing with them)it's not like i'm against the writing style and like I said the story is funny but this story doesn't have an actual plot and just full of things that the author put together and jammed it in the story not to mention the background is taken from another show the only thing unique is the author's fantasy just here to say that this story is really overrated

Worth reading it since from the beginning it's different from the naruto we know. Which includes the Charaters and all. Recommend Recommend Recommend Recommend Recommend Recommend Recommend Recommend Recommend

The grammar is terrible, and the content is even more cringe than anything I’ve ever read before not to mention the author jerking off a person who seems like a complete retard considering the extent he grew to in 2 years of having the ability to master any skill to above and beyond and he’s only a mid chunin at max considering he grew during the first fight. In all could have been a cool story if the writer wasn’t as I suspect a 12 year old with not much experience in writing. Hopefully they take the criticism rather than listen to all the other 12 year olds who don’t realize how cringey this actually is. I’m 16 by the way before anyone starts on how it’s wrong for a 30 something year old person to criticize a kid, I also really hope your young or at least around my age otherwise this is going to be awkward.

Reading this, I'm surprised more people aren't getting cancer and/or AIDS. THE POWER RANKINGS ARE RIGGED. It's the only explanation. Is anyone really surprised though?

I don't understand why would anyone read this. Powerful at a young age and also f**ked at the age of 6 because yeah. Eazy days ended and then he left that Naruto world to other worlds and he is learning everything and different means to gain power... right now there is magic and i bet there will be qi and sh*t. Fanfiction by a guy that wants everything.

II LOVEEEEE ITTTTTT!!!, It’s a brand new concept and just keeps you intrigued the whole time reading, And even though others might not accept you changing the whole story because of some bull**** it just makes it stand out from the others. Keep up the great work , Regards from yours truly SexyBeast

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fast updated, best, most satisfying, amazing novel (fan fic) i read in a very very very very very very very long time hope we get more like this

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This is a really nice story to read! I love the mastery type of cheat and the characters are nice. But needs a little work on the idea of med-nin to be a little more believable beside that a really nice story so far. Keep up the good work 😊✌️

10/10, a beautiful novel with the unprecedented ability to soothe a persons soul. I wholeheartedly recommend this novel to all people, especially nuns.

On a path of stupidity who needs plot right. Whilst ur at it who needs character develpment right. Heck who cares that the comedy is poor to make up for the lack of substance. But for you to turn the main character (naruto not this gary stu you have conjured from the depths of depravity) into a clone of a one dimensinal side character this king can no no longer tolerate this stain to our universe Congractualations you've succesfull managed to do the impossible; take a trashy series (naruto, if your stupidity surpassed this king's initial analysis) and make it worse But this king would endure the reading of this ten times over before this king even considers lowering himself to the horrors of fanfiction *shudder*

Muy bien esto es increible un poco hilarante peroenni opinion es una historia muy divertida y me encanta que cambie la historia original ****** mente me encanta Pd: i was too lazy to write in ingl but this isn't my principal language (talk spanish)

Let me sweep this. (￢＿￢)-\_ﾐ💩

Frivolous reading where nonsense comes more often than usual. Frivolous reading where nonsense comes more often than usual. Frivolous reading where nonsense comes more often than usual. Frivolous reading where nonsense comes more often than usual.

This just seemed like another time waster system story. But a few chapters in it turns to complete crap. It's just awful to read, I wonder how you could bear to write it. The author might just enjoy torturing himself by writing this stuff.

All hail Hentai Kami-sama!!!~~ I love your fanfic. I just can't resist bowing down to your godlike story-writing speed and fanservices *Cough cough

Genderbend Naruto. thats all