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I am Rimuru Tempest(Old Version. Rewrite is out.)

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The first few chapters are a bit rough since I wasn't sure what I wanted the story to be like. And the story is a bit rushed until chapter 20-25ish since I wanted to get to the point after the kids get their spirits. After that, the story breaks from canon and slows down the pacing. Hopefully, you will give the story a chance. The joke at the beginning with sage is not indicative of how the story will progress, I just thought it would be funny at the time. ... You already know how it is. Someone gets reincarnated as Rimuru and decides that he wants to have a new life with a kingdom, a harem, and strong skills. I am a first-time writer so if you have any tips let me know. It's obvious but I don't own tensura nor its characters and the picture for the fanfic is not my art. If you are the artist of it let me know and I'll change it or add your name I just found the pic on google and wasn't sure who the artist was. I'll try to update regularly but I do have a full-time job so I probably can't do it daily.

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Obligatory author review. I gotta say that this is my first time writing any actual story(even if it is a fanfic) so in my opinion, I am not that great at writing yet. However, I am trying my best. I know the dialogue and descriptions may seem a bit weird but I am learning as I go. I do try to make as much research as I can(Having the wiki, the manga, and the light novel open at the same time) to write something without creating plotholes. I am going to change the story up but it will follow a similar track until after he gives the spirits to the kids since many important things have to happen for what I want to write in the future to happen. It's hard not to fall into the trap of following exactly what the Original did since it did such a good job at it but I am trying my best. For updates, I try to update as regularly as I can but there may be some times I won't be able to since I do have a full-time job and I may be too tired or busy to write some days. For story development, I have most of the changes planned out after he gives the kids their spirits. I personally think it is pretty good but it is obviously biased as it is my story. Time will tell how that goes as chapter 12 is the most recent chapter as of writing this. For character design. I am trying to write Rimuru as a creative person. Often using spells combinations to create the most effective attack method. He is a bit of a good guy with a "Sense of justice" but when the time comes to be ruthless he is more than willing to do it. Just because he is good doesn't mean he will be obsessed with being a good guy and being a hero though. As for world background, it is Tensura's world so I cannot take credit for it. I think it is a pretty good world with a good story and that is why I decided to write a fanfic in it. Hopefully you enjoy reading the story.

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