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2021-12-07 18:52

Simply one of the best, well-thought-out Tensura fanfic. In the beginning, I was put off by the striking similarities behind the fanfic and the source material but trust me, once you get past 20ish chapters the MC will start making his moves. The MC possesses the same love for his people as Rimuru, but without the naivety he had pre-Demon Lord Arc. As a reincarnator equipped with the knowledge of the future, MC acts strategically and cautiously to maximize his advantage before the inevitable war. The MC is also wise enough to understand that although Rimuru possessed two very powerful abilities, there are other skills that can be even more potent, so he’s never idle and content with his current achievements and continues to pursue strength for his personal benefit and for his own people. Overall, it’s extremely easy to read, enjoyable, and fulfills the desire that I as a fellow WN reader / Anime watcher tend to have from the ‘holes’ that the canon Rimuru sometimes leaves behind. If you like Tensei Slime, you should definitely try it.

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Thanks for the review!

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BonAurevoir
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Obligatory author review. I gotta say that this is my first time writing any actual story(even if it is a fanfic) so in my opinion, I am not that great at writing yet. However, I am trying my best. I know the dialogue and descriptions may seem a bit weird but I am learning as I go. I do try to make as much research as I can(Having the wiki, the manga, and the light novel open at the same time) to write something without creating plotholes. I am going to change the story up but it will follow a similar track until after he gives the spirits to the kids since many important things have to happen for what I want to write in the future to happen. It's hard not to fall into the trap of following exactly what the Original did since it did such a good job at it but I am trying my best. For updates, I try to update as regularly as I can but there may be some times I won't be able to since I do have a full-time job and I may be too tired or busy to write some days. For story development, I have most of the changes planned out after he gives the kids their spirits. I personally think it is pretty good but it is obviously biased as it is my story. Time will tell how that goes as chapter 12 is the most recent chapter as of writing this. For character design. I am trying to write Rimuru as a creative person. Often using spells combinations to create the most effective attack method. He is a bit of a good guy with a "Sense of justice" but when the time comes to be ruthless he is more than willing to do it. Just because he is good doesn't mean he will be obsessed with being a good guy and being a hero though. As for world background, it is Tensura's world so I cannot take credit for it. I think it is a pretty good world with a good story and that is why I decided to write a fanfic in it. Hopefully you enjoy reading the story.

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