Obligatory author review. I gotta say that this is my first time writing any actual story(even if it is a fanfic) so in my opinion, I am not that great at writing yet. However, I am trying my best. I know the dialogue and descriptions may seem a bit weird but I am learning as I go. I do try to make as much research as I can(Having the wiki, the manga, and the light novel open at the same time) to write something without creating plotholes. I am going to change the story up but it will follow a similar track until after he gives the spirits to the kids since many important things have to happen for what I want to write in the future to happen. It's hard not to fall into the trap of following exactly what the Original did since it did such a good job at it but I am trying my best. For updates, I try to update as regularly as I can but there may be some times I won't be able to since I do have a full-time job and I may be too tired or busy to write some days. For story development, I have most of the changes planned out after he gives the kids their spirits. I personally think it is pretty good but it is obviously biased as it is my story. Time will tell how that goes as chapter 12 is the most recent chapter as of writing this. For character design. I am trying to write Rimuru as a creative person. Often using spells combinations to create the most effective attack method. He is a bit of a good guy with a "Sense of justice" but when the time comes to be ruthless he is more than willing to do it. Just because he is good doesn't mean he will be obsessed with being a good guy and being a hero though. As for world background, it is Tensura's world so I cannot take credit for it. I think it is a pretty good world with a good story and that is why I decided to write a fanfic in it. Hopefully you enjoy reading the story.

Truck-chan at your service! ..............................................................................................................................

Writing Quality 1/5 Stability of Updates : 5/5 Story Development : 2/5 Character Design: 1/5 World Background :2/5 The story had a great start, a great main idea and it seemed good on the first chapter..... However, the constant usage of weird sentences that are used in cultivation killed the entire immersion feeling and destroyed the isekai mood . I didn't came to read those weird and disgusting lines .... People in cultivation worlds seem to be born with tumors in stead of brains , talking in third character or refering himself in a different perspectives makes the reading vomitive...

my only request for this fic is make him looks like a man not a loli and make him more human not the monk I see in the real anime. I never watched this anime because I lose interest the moment I see his preference for his own body. I knew from that moment that this anime is not for me.

A fan-fiction of slime anime. 5 stars for writer dedication in providing the stable updates, 3 stars for not enough divergence from the canon (anime) timeline - the protagonist achieves the mostly same things and meets the same people as the canon's Rimuru. The biggest difference (from canon) is that he gets to have some fun *wink,wink* with waifus, different skills doesn't seem to play much of the role if everything else works the same. If there was a bigger divergence from canon, I would give this story 5 stars.

Writing Quality = 4/5 Stability of Updates 2/5 Story Development 1/5 Character Design 2/5 World Background 2/5 Loved it when I first read 80-90 chapters, came back to it after more released and it just became boring. I couldn't find myself enjoying anything and it felt like the MC was the side character not to mention uninteresting.

Fab this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍

Overall it's an amazing story and one of my favourite fanfics that I have ever read! Now I gave it 5/5 in all but character design (Which I gave 4/5) because the earlier chapters have pretty bland character design when it comes to the OC characters(Don't mean it in any negative way Bonvoyage) , However the character design of both OC character but also added stuff to canon character have been really great in the later chapters! If you are reading this and haven't read the story yet or you are in the earlier chapters then please give this story a chance! after the first 5-10 chapters the character design becomes way better! Lastly, Thank you Bonvoyage for making and publishing such a amazing story :) I always look forward to the next chapter!

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