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I am Over Powered in Douluo Dalu [Haitus]

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What is I am Over Powered in Douluo Dalu [Haitus]

Đọc tiểu thuyết I am Over Powered in Douluo Dalu [Haitus] của tác giả wheretonow được xuất bản trên WebNovel.Undefined Haitus.Join Zeng Xin in his adventure with his op powers in Douluo Dalu world.Based on DD1 plot……………......................Check out my other Fan Fic as well...

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Undefined Haitus. Join Zeng Xin in his adventure with his op powers in Douluo Dalu world. Based on DD1 plot ……………...................... Check out my other Fan Fic as well

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If hearts could speak

***WARNING*** CONTAINS STRONG MATURE CONTENT AHEAD 18+ She is someone he knew he can never have but still he owns her all self like she is the most precious treasure he has ever had! ••• Two completely drenched bodies were burning with unavoidable desires right inside the small hut which was present inside the dark forest. The only source of light was the lamp which was litted by him and was hanging on the wall giving them enough light to see eachother's face very clearly. Rain was pouring down harshly along with the thunderbolts but inside these two people have no idea what's going on outside of the hut. "Reina..." He whispered and leaned more closer to her face while she was panting heavily. He had completely caged her in between the wall and himself not leaving even an inch between them and was brushing his lips against her very lightly but occasionally. His falling damp hairs on his deep intese eyes were just making him more droolworthy and it's almost getting impossible for her not to gave into his inviting charms. "V..." She breathed out... "Shhhh..." He hushed her holding her neck with his one hand busy in tracing her jaws and lips in the process. She again took a very deep breath. But she remained froze at her place the moment she heard his next words, "I LOVE YOU!" *** Hunting by the unforgettable nightmares Stella was still struggling to win the heart of the ruthless but sinfully gorgeous mafia king Victon Rion. He is the devil in disguise and is the most powerful mafia of the entire underworld and the infamous business man who is also the youngest and richest man of the whole world just at the age of twenty four who has lost his only heart to the only girl he has been ever admired secretly and hated openly. He is like the moonlight in the darkness which surrounds her heart. She hates to be broken by him everytime but at the same time loves him so much that she can wait for him her entire life and can even die for him but due to some reasons or we can say his secrets he breaks her fragile heart every time. They are completely different from each other like hell and heaven but still attracted to each other like magnets. Can their love overcome all the barriers? Can their love conquer over the hate? Can they proof that the emotion that called 'love' still exists? To know all the answers let's read the story which is full of suspense, heartbreaks, jealousy, hate and at last the love. ***COVER IS NOT OWNED BY ME. ONLY THE EDITING PART IS DONE BY ME.***

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Snowed In: Kit and Harry

Someone -- or something -- is causing magical blizzards at Fairleigh Hall. The estate is suffering, and the Earl has requested assistance.<br><br>Constable Kit Thompson, of Bow Street’s Preternatural Division, isn’t especially thrilled to be sent out to the country. At least the assignment gets him away from fashionable London society and his own unwanted celebrity after successfully solving a notorious case. Of course, he’s now trapped at a country estate due to closed roads, snowstorms, and magic, but Kit’s always liked solving puzzles. He’s good at using empathic skills for investigations, and this is definitely a challenge. Besides, the Earl’s younger brother is an irritating and delicious temptation, all blue eyes and muscles and boundless enthusiastic optimism. Kit wants to either shake sense into him or kiss him senseless -- and can’t trust him, either, because if someone’s genuinely sabotaging the weather, everyone’s a suspect.<br><br>Harry Arden, younger brother of the Earl of Fairleigh, has never met a Preternatural Division constable before, much less a famous and celebrated one. He wants to help. And he wants to make that attractive but cynical constable smile, at least once. But the estate hides a family secret, and Harry knows perfectly well Kit doesn’t trust him ... and for good reason. Still, Harry offers to do what he can to assist with the investigation, and if that means spending more time with Kit, that’s a bonus. <br><br>When Harry and Kit end up caught by those magical storms, snowed in together at the old hunting lodge, they’ll have to trust each other with their secrets ... and their hearts.

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I Just Want Players to Save Money, They Insist on Giving Me!

Ke Jin transmigrated into an era where gaming was in utter chaos. Everyone here deeply believed in the notion of buying happiness with money, as game companies ran wild with various schemes to trick and force players to spend. As a game enthusiast from his past life, Ke Jin felt like he was in a world without sunlight. Luckily, he obtained the Free Game Production System! Players could get the ultimate reward of the "Complete Collection of All Game Design Schemes" without spending a single cent! Not spending money? How hard could that be? Heap on the benefits! Give away 50 consecutive draws during the summer heatwave! Give away 100 draws on the second day after the server opens! Due to the game reaching 50 daily active users, we are issuing a cool skin set originally priced at 999! The planner's niece just turned 17 years and three months plus 7 days old, so we're giving away 50,000 crystals! My sincerity is almost flooding the players. Surely nobody will spend now, right? Secretary: Mr. Ke, good news! Our newly launched game has just reached over a hundred million in daily transaction volume on its first day! Ke Jin: Huh? How is that good news... No, what about the other game? The one where we give full 100-99 discount vouchers upon starting, isn't its sales terrible? Looking puzzled, the secretary said while anticipating the boss's reaction: They've been shouting things like 'what a conscientious company' and 'if we don't spend, they'll go bankrupt,' so they just topped up. That game sold a whopping one hundred million copies globally. Congratulations on making a billion! "......" At 3:30 a.m., lying in bed, Ke Jin was wide awake, unable to sleep. He posted a status: Please, I beg you, stop spending. You guys are really making it hard for me... Player: Understood, Mr. Ke is hinting life is hard, brothers, let's step up! Charge it!

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Simply_Asura
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Oppai_San
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I was liking this story at first, but as the story continued it just became really bad at character progression and development. First off, with the way it is structured, it feels like the author just decided to make Zhuqing the romantic interest for the story after already writing the main characters backstory. The way he tries to introduce Zhuqing as a romantic interest and force him to train her really bothers me as before this he is depicted as a stone cold killer, but when Zhuqing threatens him he is easily coddled into saying yes without addressing the fact that he has her life in his hands and doesn't need to bend to her will, and then he also starts teaching her his clan moves and kata, which is insanely absurd considering his supposed background and the way his personality was built up to that point. My point is there was no character progression, it was just an immediate switch from stone cold killer to him having a schoolyard crush on someone that is significantly younger than him mentally. Just giving some constructive criticism, respond in the replies if you have anything you want to agree or disagree with me on.

wheretonow
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Okay, guys, the author here is just giving himself a 5-star review. I have to fill in this content, I am writing anything until the post button is activated. Ok, it is active now. Enjoy reading the story.

The_Hand
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Please don't quit. Please, for the love of everything good, don't quit. I love the story (despite the bad grammar) so please don't quit. Please

ItzJustBin
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Can I please ask if this is truly a no harem then who the heck is a female lead please????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Rafael_Sevillano
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great decision his martial spirits just don't drop it <3 ksisksjssisjsaiajsksksnsjsunsjsjsjsjssjsjjsjsjsjsbsjsusjsjsjsjsjjsbsjsjsjsusjsjs

HangerBaby
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i really dont know how this has such a high rating as its awful. the author does not know how to write and if he has improved at all he refused to edit his story. he somehow manages to change the pov multiple times in the same sentince over and over again. if you read the comments on the chapters you will realize he was called out on this several times and he still refused to fix it. that alone should be enough to make you not read it.

KING_IN_YELLOW
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Popoou
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Sejauh ini baik dalam tata translate Google untuk indonesia. Kamu bisa membacanya dengan tenang, pekerjaan yang baik untuk penulis. Terimakasih?.

Iman_13
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i like and enjoy this story the most please update more and don't drop it! akdkwksxhdkdksksdnkesksmncrbekkeskmxnnkekeelsldkckcjcncfk

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SupremeEgolist
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The story is very good but you need to edit the chapters.There are wrong names in some sentences.So,You need to correct it again,that’s all I wish for.

Leylindd
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its good man, the background, the skills, and his spirits dude so cool, the grammar are ok plus the updating speed is ok too btw that mass release is godly thank you

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Very good. This review will give you a rating, :)

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I really like this story and the only reason I didn't give a 5 star review is because the story is on hiatus

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