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2021-04-26 02:34

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I am Over Powered in Douluo Dalu [Haitus]

wheretonow
4.5
99 Chs

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Simply_Asura
Simply_AsuraLv5

why the **** u make the mc cannot socialice..For gods sake he is a reincarnater frm a world where humans use mouth to live.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

3yr

kojukanti
kojukantiLv5

I was liking this story at first, but as the story continued it just became really bad at character progression and development. First off, with the way it is structured, it feels like the author just decided to make Zhuqing the romantic interest for the story after already writing the main characters backstory. The way he tries to introduce Zhuqing as a romantic interest and force him to train her really bothers me as before this he is depicted as a stone cold killer, but when Zhuqing threatens him he is easily coddled into saying yes without addressing the fact that he has her life in his hands and doesn't need to bend to her will, and then he also starts teaching her his clan moves and kata, which is insanely absurd considering his supposed background and the way his personality was built up to that point. My point is there was no character progression, it was just an immediate switch from stone cold killer to him having a schoolyard crush on someone that is significantly younger than him mentally. Just giving some constructive criticism, respond in the replies if you have anything you want to agree or disagree with me on.

3yr
wheretonow
wheretonowAuthor

Okay, guys, the author here is just giving himself a 5-star review. I have to fill in this content, I am writing anything until the post button is activated. Ok, it is active now. Enjoy reading the story.

3yr
The_Hand
The_HandLv13

Please don't quit. Please, for the love of everything good, don't quit. I love the story (despite the bad grammar) so please don't quit. Please

3yr
ItzJustBin
ItzJustBinLv4

Can I please ask if this is truly a no harem then who the heck is a female lead please????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

3yr
Rafael_Sevillano
Rafael_SevillanoLv14

great decision his martial spirits just don't drop it <3 ksisksjssisjsaiajsksksnsjsunsjsjsjsjssjsjjsjsjsjsbsjsusjsjsjsjsjjsbsjsjsjsusjsjs

3yr
HangerBaby
HangerBabyLv4

i really dont know how this has such a high rating as its awful. the author does not know how to write and if he has improved at all he refused to edit his story. he somehow manages to change the pov multiple times in the same sentince over and over again. if you read the comments on the chapters you will realize he was called out on this several times and he still refused to fix it. that alone should be enough to make you not read it.

3yr
KING_IN_YELLOW
KING_IN_YELLOWLv4

writing quality: 3/5 - there are a lot of words that has missing letters and mc's name sometimes change I'm not talking about when he enroll in the shrek academy and the spirit beast also change like the time with the one horned thunder rhinoceros to one flaming horned rhinoceros so yeah and it change the point of view with no warning and so sudden. story development: 3/5 - the time skip is not sudden but it's not explain what happen to the time skip very well like "6 years later' I am 12 now and todays mission is my 100th mission, so now i will have a vacation worth of 5 years" it didn't explain what happen to those 6 years he didn't even tell how is his progress or so on. character design: 3/5 - the mc is describe as a person who has a very little social skills and in most description he will go by like " A kid who look like a 12 years old(even tho he's muscle is supposed to be ripped) and have a height of 5'2 with a black hair and his black eyes is like devoided from emotion(you gotta put that devoid of emotion every time)" so yeah and all so he hides the fact that he is a noble with a lot of connections for what? you may ask for no apparent reason he's parents allowed him to go too..... update stability: 4/5 - it's ok the stability of update i mean background: 3/5 - it's meh average total of: 3.2/5

3yr
Popoou
PopoouLv10

Sejauh ini baik dalam tata translate Google untuk indonesia. Kamu bisa membacanya dengan tenang, pekerjaan yang baik untuk penulis. Terimakasih?.

3yr
Iman_13
Iman_13Lv14

i like and enjoy this story the most please update more and don't drop it! akdkwksxhdkdksksdnkesksmncrbekkeskmxnnkekeelsldkckcjcncfk

3yr
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