KING_IN_YELLOW

Sanguinius slanderer, mah bot sanguinius stood at the final gate between the emperor and horus and millions upon millions of demon, before he got there he was sent in the warp by horus cuz he's scared of angel boy, then he fought greater demon of khorne after he got out of the warp he fought a imperator Titan then daemon prince angron which he got stab in the chest banish beachy angron, then horus feeling gud about himself while full on chaos bs fought angel boy and only then he got killed, my angel boy fought billions of daemons, 1v1 a warlord class titan without breaking a swear, fought 2 favorite Beach of khorne and then fought horus with battered armor, bleeding chest and exhausted mind, he did all that ALONE, imagine if dark Raven corvy is with him, horus is ded before he could reach the emperor

mf beat me by 3mins

erda didn't put the primarchs on adoption in this timeline, guysss remember the start?? ?? ?

remember the start of this fanfic? no erda

I love ur work, but don't listen to the readers too much when it comes to decisions with plot, maybe cuz I feel like you let the prime ork live cuz the reader wanted it, just make ur stories on ur own terms I would love to read what you have in mind without other people's pollution to the plot. anyway love the work🥰

ain't the imperium expunged all the data regarding the traitor son?

he really is a wannabe Empraw, he even has a "mal" lol, too bad he's bald, all that advanced hair treatment can't treat boy heresy lack of hair,

your primarch's a beach, can't even conquer sheeet, my primarch's better[img=proud] daddy Sanguinius 🗿

The idea is cool, some of the earlier chap have mistakes on who is who what is what but negligible, but the writing is overall amazing, one of the best if not the best warhammer ff, other warhammer fanfic is hard for newbie to grasp, or too convoluted and confusing, some with the more cool and awesome idea are either complete with just 16 chaps or less or dropped