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I'm Morty But Better

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What is I'm Morty But Better

Đọc tiểu thuyết I'm Morty But Better của tác giả vergil_1839 được xuất bản trên WebNovel.What would happen if someone impersonated Morty? What happens if Morty is smarter? More powerful, more cunning, with more ambitions and better than before, if you want to know this is your story, a st...

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What would happen if someone impersonated Morty? What happens if Morty is smarter? More powerful, more cunning, with more ambitions and better than before, if you want to know this is your story, a story where someone transmigrates into the body of one of the main characters.

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She slowly took a step back increasing the distance between them. "What are do doing khan...?" NOOR stuttered as he opened his shirt and throw at some corner of his room, His muscled body came in front her eyes. She gulped looked down at his abs, looking at him, she was literally gawking at him. His broad chest, bulged biceps, his muscles are flexing as he advaced towards her, ya allah..he has a six pack thundered muscled body. which was arousing the appetite. Out of nowhere. She was pinned to the closet door. He caged her between closet and him. Noor gasped and gulped looking at him. "Khan.." she whispered looking into his eyes. He pulled her closely towards him eliminating any gap between them. Noor held his shoulders to gain balance. "You looking breathtakingly beautiful" Zarkhan said near to her ear as he nibbled on them. She shivered at his touch. He slowly took his left hand caressing her left cheek looking into her eyes. Noor gulped at his desire filled eyes. Her heart was beating fastly. Her innocent eyes are making him more hard to control. He slowly placed his index finger on her forehead, slowly tucking her hair behind her ear, she closed her eyes, feeling his touch, she stick to the closet door, he trailed his index finger along her nose then slowly towards her lips and kept his finger on her lips for sometime rubbing along her lips pattern. Noor lips parted in anticipation. He slowly descended down her lips, chin, throat. She gulped knowing where his finger was trailing. He moved his finger near her cleavage which was visible . Then between her breasts. Making her breath hitch. Then slowly towards her waist and stopped near her navel which was visible through her dress. He suddenly inserted his index finger in her navel through her dress , taking her off guard. He slide her net coat aside, inserted his hand and held her right side of her bare waist and gave hard squeeze on her smooth skin. "ahhh..." she moaned and opened her eyes and looked at him. She held him as her life dependent on him. His eyes darkened with desire looking at her lips, ever so slowly he kissed at the corner of her lips. Then, he slowly placed his lips on her. Noor's breath hitched feeling his lips on her. He was not moving just feeling her soft lips against his. Enough of his patience now, he pinned her to the wall and started kissing her lips, he took her both lips into his mouth, gave a hard suck. He was kissing ,sucking and biting her lips. He titled her head for a proper angle and held her hairs tightly and devoured her lips. He took her lower lips and gave a hard bite and sucked it tasted her blood and same goes to her upper lips. This time he took the kiss any but slow, sucking her lips, biting it sometimes, nibbling it. Sometimes her lower lip, sometimes her upper lip. His tongue was drawing an art on her lips. ''m~mm~nomm~'' he kissed her mouth, then went lower to her neck, between her nape. He paused and whispered in her ears 'U R MINE' " ------------------------------------------------------ *DEVILS AMOUR: MAHNOOR (female lead ) : she is what we say a beauty with brains. a perfectionist in both athletic and academic's. nick named has "queen". she is everything a man desire in his women .But for her only "HE" has the right to desire her. after all she is his love his mate his queen his drug his eternity his possession his obsession his soul his wife -------------------------------------- [WARNING: Dark romance, jealousy , romance ; possession ,obsession ] bunch of short stories

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Gilgamos
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IsekaiLord
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bot reviews lol tf is this grammar lol bro use chat gpt or some ai to check your grammar or make your paragraphs grammatically correct.

_Sashcka_
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this interested me. not that you can find works about Rick and Morty.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend]

Ppsantana_1
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honestly I've been looking for a Rick and Morty fanfic for years, and this one pleased me in many ways, to begin with the author managed to perfectly capture the personality of the characters, the lines are very fluid, the perfect context, grammar too, the only thing I found a little unrealistic was the speed with which the protagonist grows, of course I know that with an opponent like rick, preparation is never too much, and another thing is no problem the chapters take time, they are perfect and have a lot of words, like a Someone once said, quality over quantity. That's all thank you for your attention and I hope that continuing this story brought me great happiness

BigBud
BigBudLv4BigBud

Terrible grammar, even worse than a MTL. No honor spared for the og characters (in the second chapter Beth already has the hots for Morty).

Spearow0
Spearow0Lv3Spearow0

your fanfics have a fundamental flaw, you assume morty to be dumb, if you look at the feats morty accomplished on the cartoon, dude, its impossible to say that morty is bellow average, he is already smarter that a normal person, and judging from your grammar, morty is smarter that you author.

GaZe_Zero
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Tiết lộ người tiết lộ thông tin

Mynameiskram
MynameiskramLv4Mynameiskram

Just poor writing quality. Sometimes I let the quality go for an interesting plot, but I honestly can’t get through another chapter.

VoteRat
VoteRatLv4VoteRat

The only redeemable thing about this Fanfiction is the title... Which by the way is incredible. After giving credit where credit is due, I have to say that this is a steaming pile of garbage. Any MTL would be a more cohesive and enjoyable read than this. Please, spare your brain cells and stay away from this with a 10ft pole.

cocobum
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Right now the story is good, but there are a lot of he, she and i mistakes. But i can I read it fairly normally because I'm used to corecting things in my head.

The_Eldritch_Troll
The_Eldritch_TrollLv4The_Eldritch_Troll

Are these people giving 5-star reviews reading the same fic? How can they even review it if you can understand what its saying?

michineitor
michineitorLv3michineitor

Muy buena historia y bien detallada sigue así espero con ansias el desarrollo de la historia y de los siguientes capítulos ya llevaba un tiempo esperando que alguien sacara una historia sobre esta seria gracias

ThanatosGreekGod
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I’ll be honest I REALLY want this to be good as VERY few Rick and Morty fanfics exist in fact it’s the first one i’ve seen. Author SOMETHING needs to change because these first 4 chapters were not very good quality. When describing a characters action why are you putting it in parenthesies? You need to learn how to make it flow naturally. Dialouge should have Quotation marks. Talking: ”Hello Mother, How was your day?” Thinking: ‘Man I really want to eat a pizza.’ Actions: Then I proceeded to sit at the dining table. Combined: As I walked into the kitchen I noticed mom was already there. “Hello Mother, How was your day?” I started to look for food but couldn’t find any. ‘Man I really want to eat a pizza.’ Then I walked over to the table, pulled out a chair, and proceeded to sit down. Author the way the mc has been acting is way too awkward to read. The interactions between Morty and females are explained in a way that EVERY girl is in heat basically. This is not a good writing style as it gives the female much less depth to their characters.

G2l
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Morty ☝️🦾👁️🤳...........mm................................[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Noiwillnot
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i would recommend reading this story because it's a interesting take on a reincarnation story and the main character Morty is well executed and you want to now what he will do next. the grammar may some times be rough but it's still better than som of the other things i have read

Jasperbloodwatch
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I really like the story but the writing could use some work but other then that can't wait for you to up load more. //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

Eitan_Zulueta
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Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee3eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

tio_uta
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Ei autor continue a escrever! Existe muita poucas fanfic de Rick and morty e isso tá me deixando louco! Tô gostando bastante dessa fanfic então por favor não desista dessa fanfic e continue a escrever!

axel_santander
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;) very good fic some writing errors but entertaining I would appreciate it if you updated more often. ..................................................................................................................................

Jordan_Demon
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I don't see alot of good rick and morty stories please keep updating!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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