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honestly I've been looking for a Rick and Morty fanfic for years, and this one pleased me in many ways, to begin with the author managed to perfectly capture the personality of the characters, the lines are very fluid, the perfect context, grammar too, the only thing I found a little unrealistic was the speed with which the protagonist grows, of course I know that with an opponent like rick, preparation is never too much, and another thing is no problem the chapters take time, they are perfect and have a lot of words, like a Someone once said, quality over quantity. That's all thank you for your attention and I hope that continuing this story brought me great happiness

Terrible grammar, even worse than a MTL. No honor spared for the og characters (in the second chapter Beth already has the hots for Morty).

your fanfics have a fundamental flaw, you assume morty to be dumb, if you look at the feats morty accomplished on the cartoon, dude, its impossible to say that morty is bellow average, he is already smarter that a normal person, and judging from your grammar, morty is smarter that you author.

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Just poor writing quality. Sometimes I let the quality go for an interesting plot, but I honestly can’t get through another chapter.

Right now the story is good, but there are a lot of he, she and i mistakes. But i can I read it fairly normally because I'm used to corecting things in my head.

The only redeemable thing about this Fanfiction is the title... Which by the way is incredible. After giving credit where credit is due, I have to say that this is a steaming pile of garbage. Any MTL would be a more cohesive and enjoyable read than this. Please, spare your brain cells and stay away from this with a 10ft pole.