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HP: Lord Of Seven Sins

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Stripped off of his original memories, a lone soul is stuffed into the body of Alex Jordan who was supposed to be dead in the original timeline. Not given any other option by the self-proclaimed angels, he follows their given instructions as they were the ones who stripped him off of his memories. He gave in to his fate and hoped that he would at least be working with them if he passed his test, but a person who called himself a transmigrator gave him some information about the so-called angels. Information that would change all his plans as he consumes or kills all the angels one-by-one and acquires the power of the seven deadly sins as he does so. Follow Alex in his Journey as he grows from being socially awkward and rude to a gentleman wizard for his friends and a soul eating demon for his enemies. UPDATE SCHEDULE : As of now, inconsistent. * The characters are OOC, which means they aren't an exact copy of the original. This story takes place in an AU and as much as I want to deny it, I made a few mistakes in the early chapters so you will find a plot hole (Nerfed Dumbledore at around chapter 50). I would love to fix my mistakes but doing so would change the whole plot. * As for the progression of the plot, Dumbledore will actively participate in the problems of Hogwarts due to the changed Mc makes. This starts from the end of first year at Hogwarts. Voldemort while extremely talented at magic is somewhat super dumb when it comes to tackling Harry so I'll keep him that way. * Alex, while having a decently strong "Combat ability" in the first two years, gets truly overpowered while in his third year at Hogwarts. [Read the auxiliary chapter for more info on Alex's abilities] . [Note: there will be two OCs, the MC and his best friend. There will be others too but they won't play a significant role in this fanfic. I appreciate constructive criticism and not some random bs. Lastly, I hope you all enjoy reading.]

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A small boy looked at the woman who took care of him from the day he was born, bleeding on the hard pavement. Her arms were broken while a bone pierced out from her thigh.

The time seemed to have stopped and there was a deep red hue in his eyes as he turned to stare at the bus driver who had hit his mom with intense fury. The emotions were out of his control as he saw the driver's head burst into pieces before he lost consciousness.

The time flow seemed to have gone back to normal as a group of people gathered around the dead woman and a supposedly unconscious boy.

*****

In a white room that seemed to stretch infinitely, two beings stood opposite to each other. One man and one woman seemed to be in a very serious conversation and after a while, the man nodded.

He looked at the gorgeous lady floating in front of him and said, "So… I will merge with the soul of some kid that you selected… won't I just lose my whole personality if that happens?"

"You will not. By soul I meant magic power mostly along with a little bit of his strong will, if he has any."

He sighed and before he could speak, the lady snapped her finger, turning him into a ball of light which shot at a particular direction and headed straight out of the room.

*****

The young boy opened his eyes, only to find himself in a hospital ward.

He recalled the conversation he had a few seconds ago, at least that was what he felt like. It was hard as every time he tried to remember, his head hurt. It took him a few hours but he recalled the entire conversation.

'So… Alex Jordan huh? Oh, our mom died… more like the woman who conceived the body that I'm currently occupying? Did my soul really merge? But… where did my memories go…. I'm sure I remember the talk I had in that weird white room just now and whatever this story and information that's in my mind right now. Hmm, Harry Potter… the boy who lived? Let's see what else has been stuffed into my head.'

He closed his eyes and tried to concentrate, only to lose consciousness. It took him a few hours to open his eyes again, only to frown.

'Looks like I lost consciousness, but I can now clearly access all this new information about this kid called Harry and the stuff he did in a magical school called Hogwarts. Hmm, so let's see… according to this so-called angel, I'll be assigned a sin every year starting from my first year at Hogwarts and I'm supposed to act according to the sin I've been assigned? Alright, seems simple enough.

Moving on, mom was a muggle before she died in an accident… more like died trying to save her child which is obviously me but looks like she didn't achieve her goal as this thing called magic should have acted up… more like accidental bursts of magic or whatever these people call it.

Dad must be a wizard or one of my ancestors is a wizard? Oh of course, how could I ever forget the possibility of me being a muggle born.'

He felt no remorse or sadness when he thought of his dead mother as he had almost no memories of the time spent with her. To him, it was like reading about a random person who died on a road far away and death was a common occurrence.

It was still night and the lights were off so he glanced at the other patients who were peacefully sleeping and soon, fell asleep.

*****

A few days passed and it seemed like things had happened too fast as he looked at the dead man, who was apparently his father.

The nurse put her hands on Alex's shoulder as she thought that he needed some support, which he didn't as he felt nothing towards the man. In fact, he felt emotionally empty from the time he opened his eyes.

"When he got the news that your mother had died, he got a heart attack. Unfortunately, the man who told him the news was a muggle and took him to a muggle hospital. By the time the ministry received the news, it was already too late."

The nurse said as she released him from her grasp while he simply nodded. A ministry official who had been waiting for the nurse to finish telling him the news, stepped forward.

"My name is Miguel Langley and I am from the ministry of magic. I am sorry for your loss." He said, putting forth his hand for Alex to shake, which he ignored but gave him a nod.

Seeing the lack of response, Miguel simply got into the thing he had been sent to do.

"Alex Jordan, the son of Bruce and Alice Jordan. According to the will of your father, you will inherit all of his magical currency and properties while every muggle property will go to his cousin. This is the list of everything that you will have from now."

Alex took the parchment and saw the abysmally short list that only contained four things.

Wand

Tinkers Korner in Knockturn Alley

(157) Galleons, (873) Sickles and (69) Knuts

House Elf named Toffy

He looked up at Miguel and simply stared at him with a blank expression. A few seconds later, he blinked and tears rolled down his chins. It was something he had seen a few of the patient's kids do in his ward and it looking at the nurse's expression, it seemed like he was successful.

The nurse soothed him while Miguel simply stood there, looking guilty. He sighed as he saw Alex relax and continued as he had more work to do for the day.

"You can opt for a guardian and in your case that will be your uncle. The second option is to stay alone and this is only possible because you have a house elf that can take care of you."

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IINeeRoII
IINeeRoIILv1

A rather scattered fiction in reality. (Note that I only read up to chapter 30) - To summarize the protagonist: "I think of something difficult to do and I do it easily". -An important point is that the characters are not explicitly defined at any time, one must imagine how they are without including any description (Tip: this is a Harry Potter fic, which includes characters that grow while the school years go by and not here nothing is described). -In the first year it is only said that he gathers several books but his level of knowledge is not taken into account. Just creating that game should be a revolution for the wizarding world, as it includes: Mind and Consciousness Transference, runes, advanced wand lore (I think the game detects the owner's signature? or something similar), illusion, He transmits messages by means of the tablet (wouldn't this method replace owls?), advanced alchemy, transfiguration and then space magic (teleportation). -He is a protagonist capable of doing so many things and he is still in his first year, but nothing is explained, he just does it and one is left with so many doubts and questions. -His actions do not have any impact on the story, the characters only accept what he does, period. What are their reactions? What are the consequences of their actions? What is the real impact of your presence? Remember that just by existing everything should change. Example: The game he created giving experience not only to him, but also to his enemies (Keep in mind that just colliding with a person would change everything, like the domino effect). -Then there is the fact of saving Germioni and killing a troll as if he were crushing an ant. (Is he able to kill such strong creatures that fast at this point?) It's not explained... -The chapters are uploaded quite quickly from what I see so great. -There are grammatical errors but they are few. -The upload speed seems to be quite fast and regular. I hope this helps in some way, I will continue reading since it is not boring, in fact it is interesting, but still it has too many inconsistencies that it does not describe in the review [img=recommend]

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anime_god_9144Lv10

I'm here from your previous fanfic which you decided to scrap because of some reason. I've read this remake and I've like this one better but I'll give a serious review unlike last time.Writing quality is very good and there's no grammatical mistakes whatsoever and even if there were, I'm sure that it's atleast readable.The story development is goof and I see no changes from the last book but I really hope you write for your own sake instead of your readers since that's the most enjoyable way to do it.Character design seems to be the one that changed the most compared to the last fic but this ones way better. updating stability seems good until now but I hope everything is going well at your job. world background... it was already done by JKR so there's no point talking about it. oh wait, it'll be better to write down the fact that this is an AU since there are a few key differences compared to the original if you are following your other fanfic's setting.As for the FL, assuming that you are going to make your own decision since you asked about the personalities, I'll write down what I think.Luna seems to be the best choice if you want an innocent and wholesome atmosphere since she's just weird but in a good way.Daphne will be a great choice if there's going to be some politics and drama. she's actually a great choice for most of the things since there isn't much written about her.Fleur.... a few months of relationship and then it'll go long distance. Better for a fling instead of a proper relationship.Hermione... well, keeping my prejudices aside, she will be a decent girlfriend but she will probably not listen to Alex and get into the thick of things. She'll be a great friend but she's just overused.I guess that'll be it. I put a lot of effort into this review so please don't quit. I love this book.

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