Writing Quality 4-Stars
Story Development 4-Stars
Character Design 3-Stars
Updating Stability 2-Stars
World Background 3 -Stars
Reasons below --->
First of all...
[Writing Quality]:
It is honestly not that bad as you can understand everything. But it isn't the cream of the top and we* the community* do not expect that in the slightest because as I said in nearly all my reviews, it is Webnovel and not Fanfiction.net or any other platform, there are a lot out there! Webnovel isn't the quality platform where you can expect many Literature masterpieces.
Anyway, on the next...
[Story Development]:
The Story pushes onward and in a direction I like, I think. To be serious, I don't know exactly where this Story is going, which is a good thing, it leaves the readers curious. He lives in Essos at the moment and could go anywhere. He could build an Empire, be a simple traveler, IDK, just read to know it!
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[Character Deisgn]:
I don't know how to explain it but I'll try it.
The Mc or this story/Novel has a bit of personality, even if not much, and shows that he cares about the people he loves, which isn't that good of a thing in GOT honestly....but that is my opinion.
He*Mc* isn't an Intelligent one and I doubt it will change because the author is writing the Story and unlike the Mc, he doesn't have a System to raise his intelligence, no offense. Really!
The Mc makes some very stupid mistakes which could bit him in his arse at a later date and It would in the real world, which I do not doubt, but as the author writes the story he just doesn't do it.
Etc etc.
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[Updating Stability]:
Not much to say here, it isn't regularly and that's why the US is so low rated in my review. But nobody knows what is going on in the RL and what the author does and what his motivation is, so there's that.
[World Background]:
I think the author made some big mistakes and he also stated that he didn't read the books which makes a few things difficult but not to the point where we*the readers* have to despair.
It isn't out of the place so far but the author made a mistake with the maesters.
I think you'll see it for yourself if you have enough knowledge of the ASOIAF-universe.
That's it with the review. I could write further but I am tired and want to stop writing. 😴
If the author or other people have questions about some of my points then please comment here, bye!
