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Kirdua
KirduaLv52mth
2024-08-12 02:00

The story has a very good interesting start for about 50 or so chapters but things looked to, Have taken a turn for the worse and became a harem smut story thats poorly executed

One Piece: Hashirama

theusual
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80 Chs

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Daoist_Dan
Daoist_DanLv10

Imo it was good for the first 20 chapters. Spoiler, but really I'm just telling you what's good. There's a cool Hashirama vs the world battle. Really fun imagining of what Hashirama would be like if he fought in OP world.

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UnRandom_69
UnRandom_69Lv1

Writing quality 3/5: could be better, but it is enough. Updating Stability 3/5: Doubtful. Story Development 1/5: From the first chapter to the last one (Chapter 9), the story has not advanced... Literally, he is still on the same stage. Character design 2/5: Almost nothing is known about the protagonist, I say almost, because I hope that the information we were given is not all that the protagonist is. World background 3/5: It's One Piece, the world fund is decent, much more considering that this time the story takes place some time ago before the canon, which creates some excitement waiting for what will follow. Final Review 2.4 It could be better, really, it could be, but it's not. Although there are at least only 9 chapters for now, perhaps all these aspects will improve in the future. Keep up the good work author!

5mth

Haze_
Haze_Lv4

This story drags things a lot, with that and short chapters it’s not getting anywhere anytime soon plot wise. Maybe chapter 200.

4mth
theusual
theusualนักเขียน

I loved this novel, although it's a shame that the original translation is poor. For this reason, I decided to rewrite it. Additionally, by doing so, I gain experience, which is beneficial for everyone. If someone doesn't like my work, they can go cry somewhere else. What attracted me the most about this novel is that it portrays Hashirama as a villain, a unique approach not influenced by other characters like Luffy. If you also like this novel, I would appreciate your support on my Patre0n.

5mth
Fakeuser_17
Fakeuser_17Lv3

What's the name of orginal translation?.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

4mth
XploOiD
XploOiDLv1

เผยเนื้อหาสำคัญ

3mth
jackson_smith
jackson_smithLv14

theusual Amazing Fanfic Keep up the great work You can do this One Piece fanfic idea directly after One Piece: Hashirama One Piece: Saiyan of the Strawhats A One Piece fan has watched the anime up until egghead arc and read the manga in its entirety. So when he wakes up in a white room with a blue screen that says choose your race for the world of one piece. So He chooses to be a saiyan and then there is a bright flash of light and he wakes up on an island in the east blue a year before luffy goes out to sea. MC won’t show up until the start of Syrup Village Arc. MC’s Opponents(Pre-Timeskip) by Arc: Syrup Village:Puma (Marvel) Baratie : Archer (Fate)(No Magic) Arlong Park: Zabuza Momochi Drum Island: Sub-Zero (Mortal Kombat) Alabasta: Mr.X aka Asuma Sarutobi (Naruto) Enies Lobby: Takeda (Mortal Kombat) Thriller Bark: Kakuzu (Naruto) Super Attacks(Pre-Timeskip):Double Sunday,Die Die Missile Barrage,Milky Cannon, Burning Attack, Light Grenade, Spirit Bomb. Ultimate Attacks (Pre-Timeskip): Final Flash, Super Kamehameha, Super Galick Gun. MC’s Opponents(Post-Timeskip) by Arc: Fishman Island: Kisame Hoshigaki Dressrosa: Chuuya Nakahara Whole Cake Island: Super Buu Wano Country: Baran(Dragon Quest) Egghead Island: Atlas (Teen Titans) Super Attacks(Post-Timeskip): Galick Gun,Atomic Blast ,Die Die Missile Barrage, Burning Attack,Big Bang Attack, Burning Slash, Hellzone Grenade,Power Rush. Ultimate Attacks Post-Timeskip: Final Kamehameha, Atomic Kamehameha, Spirit Sword, Warp Kamehameha, Final Shine Kamehameha,Power Wall. Harem Kaya Nami Nojiko Alvida Mikita aka Miss Valentine Zala aka Miss Double Finger Raki Gina Nico Robin Kalifa Perona Boa Hancock Boa Sandersonia Boa Marigold Aphelandra Sadi (One Piece) Monet Viola Charlotte Smoothie Charlotte Citron Charlotte Cinnamon Wanda Carrot Kozuki Hiyori Ulti Black Maria Solitaire Stussy Vegapunk/Lilith Vegapunk/York

3mth
Big_jay1o
Big_jay1oLv4

I will state this is a amazing story. The character is his own person, and from what I have seen, so far is only getting stronger. The author is giving true props to the God of Shinobi so I suggest reading it.

4mth
Derek_Lycan
Derek_LycanLv4

Great so far. writing needs some fine tuning. minor phrasing error. update... I would prefer more frequent world and character design seems good so far. 4/5 for character. Depending on how the story goes this can be either good fanfic or mediocre. Please gor the love of everything good in this world, DO NOT MAKE THE MC A SYSTEM SLAVE OR SYSTEM DEPENDENT .

4mth
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