Writing quality 3/5: could be better, but it is enough. Updating Stability 3/5: Doubtful. Story Development 1/5: From the first chapter to the last one (Chapter 9), the story has not advanced... Literally, he is still on the same stage. Character design 2/5: Almost nothing is known about the protagonist, I say almost, because I hope that the information we were given is not all that the protagonist is. World background 3/5: It's One Piece, the world fund is decent, much more considering that this time the story takes place some time ago before the canon, which creates some excitement waiting for what will follow. Final Review 2.4 It could be better, really, it could be, but it's not. Although there are at least only 9 chapters for now, perhaps all these aspects will improve in the future. Keep up the good work author!

This story drags things a lot, with that and short chapters it’s not getting anywhere anytime soon plot wise. Maybe chapter 200.

I loved this novel, although it's a shame that the original translation is poor. For this reason, I decided to rewrite it. Additionally, by doing so, I gain experience, which is beneficial for everyone. If someone doesn't like my work, they can go cry somewhere else. What attracted me the most about this novel is that it portrays Hashirama as a villain, a unique approach not influenced by other characters like Luffy. If you also like this novel, I would appreciate your support on my Patre0n.

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The story has a very good interesting start for about 50 or so chapters but things looked to, Have taken a turn for the worse and became a harem smut story thats poorly executed

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I will state this is a amazing story. The character is his own person, and from what I have seen, so far is only getting stronger. The author is giving true props to the God of Shinobi so I suggest reading it.

Great so far. writing needs some fine tuning. minor phrasing error. update... I would prefer more frequent world and character design seems good so far. 4/5 for character. Depending on how the story goes this can be either good fanfic or mediocre. Please gor the love of everything good in this world, DO NOT MAKE THE MC A SYSTEM SLAVE OR SYSTEM DEPENDENT .