Alright. After 30 Chapters...This is my review. For my fellow Evil MC readers, you won’t be disappointed with this novel. Here Goes: What will you do if thrown into a world filled with dangers? What will you do if thrown into a world where immortality was possible? WIll you waste away? Becoming nothing more than a nameless pebble by the roadside? Or will you steel yourself and grasp the hand of power, gowing from a mere pebble to a mountain by any means necessary? Pros: Character Design: This story follows Yokuma, a high functioning sociopath, finding himself in the world of Naruto. Unlike other fics where they have cheats, he has nothing but his wits and grits. The author has done well in providing a clear description about his personalities and what drives him forward. Yokuma here cares about nothing but his goals. He will do ANYTHING, even harming himself, to achieve his goals. A wise man once said: Be ruthless onto others but even more so to yourself on the path to power. Yokuma here properly exhibits that. The side characters also have a sense of depth to them, not purely 2D carbon cut-outs. There’s no Romance, Harem or Familial piety. The MC cares about none of that except for what benefits him. World Building: Nothing much to say about the world building since this is a fanfic. Still, the descriptions are good and paints a clear image about the world as whole. Development: The progress of the story is very good. It’s neither fast nor slow. It gives you that itch for the next chapter. To know what happens next. So far, the story’s progress is good. Cons: Repetitions: Now, my slight quibble will be the incessant reminders about his inner thoughts. Don’t get me wrong, It’s definitely a good thing but it’s sometimes not needed in certain places. Breaks the immersion a bit. But maybe this is just my own slight issue. It’s not much of a problem. Grammar: The grammar is also good but the author still needs to work on his sentence structuring . The run-on sentences and punctuations need to be addressed further. However, compared to most other WN books this is miles better. All in all, this FanFic is a beautiful one and I highly recommend it.
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A good review. Not bias, or adding anything extra. Just getting to the point straight away. Introduction was beautiful to get people to read further. An overall review of the book instead of one aspect. Even backing up your points pretty solidly. All in all... Excellent review. This will help me improve further.
great review. sounds like a terrible story, I appreciate giving us the heads up.
Pfft.
DetachedDreamer:great review. sounds like a terrible story, I appreciate giving us the heads up.
That is hilarious 😂😂😂. But I'm gonna check out the story. Sounds interesting.
IAmJustBored:Pfft.
don't worry about him he is one of the people that only read novels if they have a harem
IAmJustBored:Pfft.
