I read like 10-13 chapters and all I could say is, the start felt a lot like TBATE but its very rushed with some minor changes how the events unfolded. The start was extremely rushed and a thousands things happened in the span of what 7 chapters? I love the writing quality, the Arthur used a large vocabulary range which made the story feel rich. but timing and pace was through the roof, rocket fast in fact.

masochist*

YES!! THATS RIGHT, FOR SCIENCE!! TOTES NOT FOR HIM BEING A MASOCHISM AT ALL AND PURPOSELY DID THAT IN THE NAME OF SCIENCE.

Honest opinion here, as what you've requested. There are a couple minor errors in your writing, as I believe you don't double check each entire chapter thoroughly, so if possible I think you should focus more on that. Stability of updates seems to be great as I see 2 chapters per day, but you've only been writing for 3 days now so I can't give you a full 5 star yet. Story development seems fine as of now, still not giving a 5 star as It's still too early to decide. Character design seems hmm.. the mc seems to be a little too smart and he's using terms that country siders wouldn't know that much about. His background story seems also kinda rushed and it is kind of overused, the whole village/place whatever getting slaughtered and mc falling into despair but its fine still. World background seems to be good, I gave it a 5 star. And another thing is the whole system the dragon gave to Simon. It's a little complicated and stuffy, kinda hard to read. I'd rather much prefer you simplifying it down a little. Along with the stat points things, I honestly didn't know much of what was happening with all that math lol. Just here trying to have a late night read, anyways good luck on your novel mate! It has potential.

69?? Hmm..

A little rude innit mate. We all are trying to do what we love here. the author is just trying to do what he likes to, just because you don't like it you don't have to trash talk the dude and the story bro.