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I read like 10-13 chapters and all I could say is, the start felt a lot like TBATE but its very rushed with some minor changes how the events unfolded. The start was extremely rushed and a thousands things happened in the span of what 7 chapters? I love the writing quality, the Arthur used a large vocabulary range which made the story feel rich. but timing and pace was through the roof, rocket fast in fact.

How I Became the Strongest Sovereign

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Firstly, thank you for the review! Indeed the pacing was too fast in the beginning, as it was my first time writing and made mistakes in the tempo of the storyline. I do urge you to carry on reading as the pacing gets better and so does the plot. Thank you for reading my first work! 👍