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Sorry for omitting the age of the two. Though chronologically they are the same age, which is three days old. Their physical appearance suggest that Talon is in his mid thirties while talone is late twenties.
Good day, first of all thank you for your honest insights about my book so much that you already have the impression of how the mc will become but I can neither confirm nor deny, it might go that way it might not. The world building concept will be unveiled in the coming chapters as I decided that it would be stupid to info dump in the beginning chapters as it always bores me. I'm that type of guy who explore it so that's the reason the world building content on the published chapters lacking but I'm providing pieces of puzzles. Also, I see that you're having with the mc but how can he improve if you don't give some details? I'll look into it. Anyways thank you.
Just because it's fictional doesn't mean it's exempted to the universal laws of constant.