Review Detail of Daoistq8GRCN in The Sorcerer Supreme Have it Easy in Another World
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the main character needs to improve, I can already see where this going. in one scenario is going to give his stuff way, in another scenario he will be push around by the female. this is just my opinion so far from what I've read. however it is unknown how this story will go, maybe the author might surpass my expectation. In general its good, its seems kinda slow but also not slow, the speed of the story is just right. the world build is still not well known, other then the creatures/race's living in there, not that much is known about the world his in. the grammar is also good, couldn't find anything wrong with it, maybe someone will prove me wrong. other then that I recommend others to read it. p.s- this is not my main account so please keep in mind if it looks weird it's because i'm using my other account.
The Sorcerer Supreme Have it Easy in Another World
BE_SMART
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Good day, first of all thank you for your honest insights about my book so much that you already have the impression of how the mc will become but I can neither confirm nor deny, it might go that way it might not. The world building concept will be unveiled in the coming chapters as I decided that it would be stupid to info dump in the beginning chapters as it always bores me. I'm that type of guy who explore it so that's the reason the world building content on the published chapters lacking but I'm providing pieces of puzzles. Also, I see that you're having with the mc but how can he improve if you don't give some details? I'll look into it. Anyways thank you.
BE_SMART:Good day, first of all thank you for your honest insights about my book so much that you already have the impression of how the mc will become but I can neither confirm nor deny, it might go that way it might not. The world building concept will be unveiled in the coming chapters as I decided that it would be stupid to info dump in the beginning chapters as it always bores me. I'm that type of guy who explore it so that's the reason the world building content on the published chapters lacking but I'm providing pieces of puzzles. Also, I see that you're having with the mc but how can he improve if you don't give some details? I'll look into it. Anyways thank you.