Dissapointed_One
My dissapointment is unlimited.
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Dissapointed_One13hตอบกลับถึง Helia_KingKill yourself 😊😸
A Gigantic Shark but as it comes closer, It becomes Obvious that it isent a Normal One for it has far more Fins than Normal(2 Back, 3 seid and 4 Aft Fins) and 3 Pairs of eyes(6 in total), the lower Jaw seams to Split in the Middel, the Body is armored in Scales that look like Stone and are of a Lapiz Blue in Color, from the Gaps of the Scales pulses of electric blue light shines in a stendy rythem like a Heart Beat and Arcs of Purple Lightning Jump around on it's Body with every Motion it makes- Dissapointed_One13hตอบกลับถึง Poet_man
I asked why did he add nails to the bat, that only increases it's damage in video games, you answered "long nails 💀" and even this stupid author liked your comment for some reason. I also wrote "Wait..." at the end as if realizing that he has a gamer system, so it could actually work. Understand? Hope so.
I found a hammer in a small toolbox, used it to pry off nails from the bed and clothing wardrobe, and hammered a few nails into a signed hardwood baseball bat I found in a trophy case. - Dissapointed_One13hตอบกลับถึง Helia_King
I'm still right. Always am. Kill yourself.
A Gigantic Shark but as it comes closer, It becomes Obvious that it isent a Normal One for it has far more Fins than Normal(2 Back, 3 seid and 4 Aft Fins) and 3 Pairs of eyes(6 in total), the lower Jaw seams to Split in the Middel, the Body is armored in Scales that look like Stone and are of a Lapiz Blue in Color, from the Gaps of the Scales pulses of electric blue light shines in a stendy rythem like a Heart Beat and Arcs of Purple Lightning Jump around on it's Body with every Motion it makes - Dissapointed_One1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"Yeah right, then be my guess and eliminate from this world" he sarcastically said as he shook his head.
- Dissapointed_One1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Is he so tired he didn't realize it used his name?
"What the heck, where is it?" he muttered under his breath, tapping the screen in search of the elusive 'X' button to dismiss the intrusive ad. - Dissapointed_One1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
It literally doesn't. What? How is that silly or amusing?
It may look amusing and silly as a 18 years old teenager was smirking at the thought of a new movie that came from the Marvel franchise which he like. - Dissapointed_One1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
' ' those are used for thoughts.
'Useless.' He muttered underneath. - Dissapointed_One1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Emptiness? Are we actually inside the Void rn?
Suddenly, the sound of a loud barking dog echoed through the emptiness, growing louder and louder with each passing moment. It was difficult to pinpoint the exact location of the barking, but it seemed to be coming from somewhere in the distance. - Dissapointed_One1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Too much and too little description.
The dimmed streetlights flickered faintly, making it hard to see objects from a distance. - Dissapointed_One1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
The hell am i supposed to envision here? A sunset inside the void? It's so easy to fix, too! Ugh.
The occasional chirp of a bird or rustle of the wind broke the stillness as if nature itself was awed by the beauty of the moment. - Dissapointed_One1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Did ya miss me!?
Prologue - Dissapointed_One1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Thanks for telling us this! We wouldn't have known otherwise.
Although to tell the truth, his name now was not John but Sokka, he was a native of the South Pole along with his sister Katara, the girl from before. - Dissapointed_One1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
How did you bring her to him author? You can't do that without consent!
John felt his body being roughly shaken. When he opened his eyes he saw a brunette girl with blue eyes, just as I brought her to him, shaking him. - Dissapointed_One1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Fun fact:your brain will do anything to keep you alive.
He couldn't take it anymore. The waves were dragging him harder and harder. His mind told him to give up, but his body didn't. - Dissapointed_One1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Minimus doesn't fit
Since he was already of a certain age, John began to live on his own, doing work on the street to earn a minimum of money. - Dissapointed_One1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
What does her father have to do with anything?
His mother died when he was still a small child and her father spent his time traveling, to the point that she didn't know about him to this day. - Dissapointed_One1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Yep I'm out.
We are still connected from the last night activity. - Dissapointed_One1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Yeah, i won't be here for long.
"Well I can't blame her, it is getting late for me, I have to go to the Fairy tail guild for rank evaluation exam and monitor it." - Dissapointed_One1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"Wake up"