When did I ever say that? Stop making false assumptions. I don’t recall ever posting a comment like that on this fanfic.

Nah, Moonlit fantasy and Darwin game started off as good but got very boring. Same repetitive plot, blah blah blah. In all seriousness, don’t waste your time on it.

I always wondered what’s the point adding a reincarnation trope if he is not going to remember much about this world? I only see it as an excuse to make jim seem more mature for his age. Let’s see what you cook with this reboot or whatever you call it.

You promised two chapters. Where’s our two chaps? Give us one more or I want refund for my stones!!!

Of course its fine. This would make him more serious about taking care of his family and stop f*****g around with random women. Its a good way to make jis character develop even more.

Nah. two weeks is too little. She is too beautiful to be forgotten. I pity Kagaya for being cursed. Bozo couldn’t even accompany his wife till the end.

I truly feel bad for the original author of HOTD. Poor guy didn't even get to finish the work he was most recognized for. RIP. Press F to pay respect

Stop using AI dude. No wonder you are getting less views. Be confident in yourself even if tour english is not the best. Hire an editor or something or try to improve your weiting skills. If you want to, I could help edit couple chapters for F R E E. I have helped many fanfic authors lol. Peace.

Going good. A suggestion for his future power appearance, what about giving him a transformation more like Kafka from Kaiju No. 8 but of course better?

Are you using AI by any chance to enhance your writing? I am not judging you or anything I just want to ask. Because many words you are using seems more…monotone and robotic rather than a being more ‘humanly’. I might be wrong so please don’t get offended.

Dude why Baki? He is already strong enough. He would beat the living s*** out of everyone. Make him go to a stronger world or it would be a waste of so many chapters. Don’t tell me you plan to do the same thing you did in your Tokyo fanfic.

This is an amzing fanfiction. Main character is very interseting given he has lived many lives. My only concern is that please don’t make this fanfic into power creep.

Already donated all stones. Now gimme more or I will hunt you down and make you write more

Campione. Don’t do Danmachi because it is so overused and you already covered that in one of your fanfics.

A good guy?Him? Lol, its like saying Muzan is a good guy for helping to ‘maintain’ human population.

Fake? So the summoned Tatsumaki was also a clone made by the system by copying the existence of original Tatsumaki? That’s…lackluster.

Is this fanfic set in prime or cube Omniverse?

I was mostly talking about his/her writing. I am very picky when it comes to writing. I am not saying its bad. Its way better than those AI users spread throughout webnovel fanfiction area. I read till ch 108 and it sucked. As for the ch 4 you showed? I have read till that in past and I quit, but then I decided to give it a second try. I am not a rage quitter, I am pretty chill but I can get very honest in reviews.

I read while not signed in. I logged in just to write this review. Kindly don’t jump to conclusions.

Your writing sucks. Doesn’t make sense. You have poor plot progression and need some work to be done in structuring your writing. What a disappointment. No wonder this is not 4.8 star or kore: