Review Detail of Cupidarrow in A Nascent Kaleidoscope.
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Your writing sucks. Doesn’t make sense. You have poor plot progression and need some work to be done in structuring your writing. What a disappointment. No wonder this is not 4.8 star or kore:
A Nascent Kaleidoscope.
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I read while not signed in. I logged in just to write this review. Kindly don’t jump to conclusions.
Bagyong_Pablo:Clearly Rage bait or just downright idiotic, you haven't even gotten to the good parts, and you have the gall to judge the entire story when you've only read 4 chaps?💀💀💀image
Nah you just rage baiting you 4 chapter reader, but i do have to say, what made you say that the plot progression sucks, writing is bad, story structure is bad, etc., cuz i have read up to date and it is great, but i just can't see what you mean, I'd like to see your perspective as far as i can see, I dont see those things, or i don't see it the way you do.
Cupidarrow:I read while not signed in. I logged in just to write this review. Kindly don’t jump to conclusions.
I was mostly talking about his/her writing. I am very picky when it comes to writing. I am not saying its bad. Its way better than those AI users spread throughout webnovel fanfiction area. I read till ch 108 and it sucked. As for the ch 4 you showed? I have read till that in past and I quit, but then I decided to give it a second try. I am not a rage quitter, I am pretty chill but I can get very honest in reviews.
Bagyong_Pablo:Nah you just rage baiting you 4 chapter reader, but i do have to say, what made you say that the plot progression sucks, writing is bad, story structure is bad, etc., cuz i have read up to date and it is great, but i just can't see what you mean, I'd like to see your perspective as far as i can see, I dont see those things, or i don't see it the way you do.
Cupidarrow:I was mostly talking about his/her writing. I am very picky when it comes to writing. I am not saying its bad. Its way better than those AI users spread throughout webnovel fanfiction area. I read till ch 108 and it sucked. As for the ch 4 you showed? I have read till that in past and I quit, but then I decided to give it a second try. I am not a rage quitter, I am pretty chill but I can get very honest in reviews.