Oh... that part... I'm sorry for the confusion. It was actually intentional since Athos was using her real voice that time. However, thanks for notifying me so I could edit the chapter to make it less confusing. :)

Pretty good novel, although I still don't really get the scenery of the world I am in. All I could do was assume it was London in the 1800s which doesn't really make much sense. Besides that, keep up the good work!

A nice story and quite a slight twist on the isekai genre. Although there are some info-dumping once in a while, it's not really enough to make you drop it. Good job!

Pretty good for a romance novel. However, I do sometimes get confused on whose perspective I am on, but besides that, this novel is good. Keep up the good work!

Great title and also very intriguing indeed! Looking forward to seeing more! And I hope you get to finish your novel! Good luck to the author!

Why? Thank you, kind sir, for your review.

Why, hello readers. Blue Crow here... Wonder how I got my name? That's something you will find out later. However, I'm not here for petty introductions. Just here to announce that the entire first volume has been finished and will go under peer-editing so anyone who wants to read it without having to wait for the next day can start binging on it. Well, I wouldn't recommend that behavior for the second one though... I will accept any criticism as long as you say it nicely (even a bird of deception like me have feelings too, you know) Well... I should go now... I need to make sure Father didn't mess up the laws of creation again... Toodles...

Nice story! I wouldn't say it is one of the best, but it surely is one of the good ones. For now, I will give it 5 stars, but it really depends on how the story goes, doesn't it?

You made excellent use of grammar and suspense which really intrigues me. However, I can't make an accurate review on this due to it only having one chapter. Maybe once it has four chapters, then I will return. For now, this is my score.

Although the rhythm in the first few chapters were especially enough to make me skim-read most of the time, it is still an interesting story. However... the characters do sometimes feel kinda robotic, but overall, it's a great novel! I love how much you improve in the later chapters. Continue the good work!

Despite the constant simple sentences, this novel was unexpectedly almost perfect. I am not a writer, so I do not know if there are any other errors. Good luck to the Author!

Well, in truth, I forgot about it in the previous chapter, but I suddenly thought, "Hey, having him forget the orb sounds funny."

If you read closely, you should notice that there was no description at all for an orb.

Oops

thx for the advice!

i wished that as well. I usually try on saturdays but when it comes to sundays, my brain unexpectedly dies :D

Will edit once more chapters come

This novel is pretty good in my opinion. However, a review is a review and I need to state my thoughts on the flaws. (I ignored the grammatical errors as requested. :) ) First of all, some of the dialogue feels a bit off at certain points of the story. However, you did manage to fix that in the later chapters so keep up the good work on editing some of the earlier chapters. The characters are pretty much fleshed out, but well, due to the first flaw, they could feel robotic. However, as I said before, you did fix it up a bit in the later chapters. To be honest, your world is pretty good, although I prefer not knowing the characters' names first. You can introduce your characters through dialogue which also helps with the plot. However, you can just ignore this if you don't feel comfortable doing so. After all, that would be a lot of peer-editing to do. That's all I have to say. Keep on improving and good luck!

First review! Will edit this once this story gets more chapters. Your grammar is pretty good for someone who doesn't have English as their first language so I will just put five stars for now. Idk the others since there are very few chapters now, but the character design seems to be good for now. Keep up the good work!

Do you mean 'pain and fear OF tearing her mind apart' or just a comma in the place of 'of'?