Hello, it would help me a lot if you could write me an opinion about what you think about this fanfiction. Bearing in mind that English is not my first language, please be forgiving of grammatical mistakes. because I write out of passion, I don't have a beta reader to correct them, and I have very little time. If you want to write a review, I would appreciate it if you could concentrate more on the story.[img=recommend]

I'm a fan of these books, lately I've tried as much as possible to get a little inspiration from the way Rick writes. an lil idea you could say.

well Elias is older than Arthur...his birthdate is 31.12.

it's because I'm writing from my phone... sorry if I made reading more difficult...[img=Speechless]

maybe

ch. 18

I would appreciate an review, I honestly don't know if where the story is going is good or not...as I said, I want to become an author, and I am learning from this fiction, but I would appreciate it if you could tell me if I am doing well or not, and if not where should I improve... English is not my first language, it's my 4th, because of that I know there are some grammatical mistakes and I apologize...

She is still harry's mother, and she does have some regrets.

Thank you for saying this, it helps more than you think

Unfortunately, the story will be written more in the first person from Arthur's perspective, I might write from other perspectives later. You will learn that her story also went forward. not everything is the same, many did not die.

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My desire is to become an author... this is the reason why I write, and I would love to hear your opinions about this fiction. as you can tell, English is not my first language... but I try to make as few grammatical mistakes as possible...that's about all I wanted to tell you... I wish you a pleasant day ahead.

I apologize, i write this on my phone 📱😅

I want to believe that magic influences in a way the way magical beings think, I made Arthur's power be such that it works or is activated when he realizes that it exists, deep down he knew that it's something but he didn't know that until he received the letter, his magic works freely and out of the ordinary. and as for his way of being, Arthur is loyal and brave for his friends, intelligent and curious he wants to know more, but the one that characterizes him the most he is a person who adapts, a person who uses everything around him. He is a Slytherin. And as for his family and the unanswered questions, it is clear to him and it is not easy for him, but because of this he needs knowledge and knowledge to find out the desired answers. That's why he's in Hogwarts. And as for his mother, I can't tell you anything yet, because it would be too big a spoiler. believe nothing is what it seems.

Chapters will be released slowly, because I want Arthur's story to make sense..this book will only be from Arthur's first year .... if you like it, leave a comment and I might add the suggested things if it fits the story I have in my head.

He is free only in name, because he desires to be paid, but both of them are quite special, you will see later in the story. May or not may be in this book

Well, she is friends with her too xD I needed semone who hates the non-wizarding people, pansy will be used for the plot xD

Well,English is not my first language, i apologize for that, i will try to take some of your points of course but dont expect something to be be perfect, after all this is my first fanfiction and secondly this is a fanfiction please remember that.

I'll try, honestly, this is the first time I'm trying to write a fanfiction. Will do manny mistakes but glad to hear some feedback.