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Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT

Jon Snow, a boy destined for a life of contempt by almost everyone around him, but a divine intervention can change everything. The boy who will pave the way to build the most powerful nation in the world. I crafted this story with a focus on the creation of a kingdom, battles, economy, navigation, and exploration of the entire universe of Planetos, with a central character in mind. Am I wealthy? The Stormlands, Dorne, the Reach, and the Westerlands all want to establish trade agreements with me. And the East? I have trade agreements with Braavos, Pentos, Myr, Tyrosh, Lys, and Volantis. I can negotiate with everyone in Essos, except in the Slaver's Bay after I stole 100,000 chained men from them. So, do you have enemies in Essos? About that? I indeed have quite a few. I started by stealing slaves from them, then raised a khalasar and began a bloodbath in the Dothraki Sea for fun. I was even named a Khal in Vaes Dothrak. Not to mention, the last time I went to Essos, I toppled the Titan's statue in Braavos. They wanted to stop me from destroying the House of Black and White. That day wasn't very pleasant for the Braavosi. Wow, and the kingdoms below the Wall? The Wall? It no longer exists; I brought it down a while ago. I took the North as part of my kingdom and left the South of the Neck to the Southerners. They tried to reclaim the kingdom, but now the Southerners tremble when they feel my armies on their lands. I've personally killed one or two of their kings. Really? Yes, ask what's left of Oldtown. I would answer, it turned to ashes. Lannisport? I burned it. Casterly Rock? It's at the bottom of the sea. The Twins? I blew up the entire place. King's Landing? The city is standing, but the Red Keep is history. -------------------------------------------- This Fanfic's Schedule for the week, updates on: Sunday, Tuesday and Friday. ---------------------------------------------- With gratitude and enthusiasm, Raccoon! And your raccoon welcomes you to the Raccoon League! An exploration across different universes, be prepared for adventure! With over 1 million words published! ---- Current explorations: One Piece: I am a Different Luffy! (7 Chapters/Week) Danmachi: Infinite Mana System! (3 Chapters/Week) Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Artica! (3 Chapters/Week) Naruto: Light Ninja! (3 Chapters/Week) Naruto: Minato Namikase SI! (3 Chapters/Week) The Witcher: As Uchiha Madara! (3 Chapters/Week) HP: Shadow Monarch! (3 Chapters/Week) Game of Thrones: DragonBorn! (1 Chapter/Week) ---- Explore the Unexplored! Become an exclusive supporter on Patreon and unlock advanced chapters -> RaccoonLeague | Patreon https://www.patreon.com/RaccoonLeague

RaccoonLeague · หนังสือและวรรณกรรม
4.7
148 Chs

A third son of prophecy (Harry Potter AU / Assassin's Creed lore)

Harry Potter with many changes to canon. Hogwarts doesn't start at 11 but three years later and that is by far the biggest change, which brings many other changes naturally with it. First years are older and more mature, but also more headstrong and set in their ways. Seventh years are 20-22 and therefore pretty much college-aged. Harry will have lived with his abusive relatives for three more years. Hermione will be more socially awkward at first, but also more determined to be smarter than everyone. Ron will be more of an insufferable twat because he was with his twin brothers for longer. ----- My MC will be born with knowledge of the Harry Potter franchise and, which he will find out gradually, a special bloodline. He will not have knowledge of the Assassin's Creed games, but I will tell you now, he will have the Isu bloodline like Altair, Ezio, and Desmond - just from a different Isu 'god'. Geographically, I settled on the Norse Pantheon instead of the Roman one like Desmond's lineage, and his magic gives my MC the natural ability to dream of the lives of his ancestors, so he doesn't need an Animus to do it. Any AC plotlines will come much, much later. The modern brotherhood and the templars will not be outwardly knowledgeable about magic, because I don't care to write all the consequences that would bring with it. But the Mentor (leader of the Brotherhood) and the Templar Council will probably know about magic regardless. (Just don't think about it.) MC will hate Dumbledore and fully assumes him to be a secret Dark Lord, which might or might not be true - but by the circumstances of his birth and upbringing, Dumbledore will have certainly earned the animosity the MC feels. All rights to the story's many elements like Harry Potter and the Assassin's Creed lore belong to their respective owners.

Nuclide · หนังสือและวรรณกรรม
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Grim999
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My desire is to become an author... this is the reason why I write, and I would love to hear your opinions about this fiction. as you can tell, English is not my first language... but I try to make as few grammatical mistakes as possible...that's about all I wanted to tell you... I wish you a pleasant day ahead.

Vishisht_Magan
Vishisht_MaganLv3Vishisht_Magan

OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE SHOUTOUT, you kinda got my name wrong but nevermind, THANK YOU SO MUCH, MAN I LOVED YOUR STORY AND I AM THANKFUL THAT MY VOTE HELPED, EVEN IF A LITTLE BIT, I HOPE YOU FINISH THIS STORY ONE DAY AND I PROMISE TO GIVE ALL THE POWER STONES I CAN

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I really like the concept of blending The castlevania series and the Harry Potter series because both of them are quite high on my list of favourite fantasy media.

Grim999
Grim999นักเขียนGrim999

I would appreciate an review, I honestly don't know if where the story is going is good or not...as I said, I want to become an author, and I am learning from this fiction, but I would appreciate it if you could tell me if I am doing well or not, and if not where should I improve... English is not my first language, it's my 4th, because of that I know there are some grammatical mistakes and I apologize...

Vishisht_Magan
Vishisht_MaganLv3Vishisht_Magan

Ok, thank you for mentioning Lily, I can't wait to see Arthur interacting with Lily, please continue with the fanfic, I'm loving it very much, just wished the chapters were a bit longer, but honestly I am loving this, thank you so much. You are doing quite well for an amateur author, keep working hard, you will become a great author one day [img=recommend]

Vishisht_Magan
Vishisht_MaganLv3Vishisht_Magan

When will we see Lily? I am curious as to what happened to her? Is she still Harry's mother? Does she miss Severus, does she regret choosing James over Severus?

Vishisht_Magan
Vishisht_MaganLv3Vishisht_Magan

The updates are a bit irregular, but personally I am really invested in the story as it dives into a what-if scenario previously never looked into, Severus Snape is a complex character and it's nice to see him explored as a legend.

Poison_Tester
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Writing Quality- Doesn't really make the reader invested into the story. 3/5 Updates- Seems solid for now but too few chapters to tell. 5/5 Story- Very similar to most Harry Potter fanfictions and doesn't have anything unique to make it stand out truly. 2/5 MC- Not seeing anything unique still sadly. But again too few chapters to tell for now. 2/5 World Background- It's Harry Potter. 3/5 I wouldn't really say this is a must read but if you have some free time I would say check this book out. Overall 3/5.

Vishisht_Magan
Vishisht_MaganLv3Vishisht_Magan

The chapter length has been short, Arthur is like a Gary Stu Malfoy felt OOC, and the OCs lack any contribution towards the story, but I think what your strengths are the OCs themselves, Iris feels like a great mentor and her feud with Dumbledore and Lily can be expanded on and while Elias may feel like a Ron, he is different in the way that he would be what you would expect from a side character that actually helps and contributes, sort of like Hermione but without the annoying traits, the mystery, suspense, and world-building, now I know Harry Potter is an already established world but your focus on the story of Arthur and the consequences of the actions of the previous generation we find out gradually, is impeccable. Let me know what type of Author you want to be and what your goals are, I might be able to help. I have deep knowledge regarding tropes.

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