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FVJWQIFVJWQIFVJWQI

Lv3
2020-02-18 เข้าร่วมแล้วBrazil
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10.5h

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    ตอบกลับถึง PikaAndrew

    Thank you very much for your support, I will try my best!

    My goal for this year is to continue posting the reformulated story, but in my native language while I improve my English to see if I can translate the chapters myself, ensuring a better job.
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    ตอบกลับถึง PikaAndrew

    I'll add it in the future if the work goes well and gets a little popular!

    The larger one pointed forward and branched out, resembling a millennia-old tree, while the smaller pair pointed backward, curving like a screw. The horns shone with a dazzling mix of golden and green light.
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    ตอบกลับถึง PikaAndrew

    Thank you for your help!

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    ตอบกลับถึง KangGalon

    Thank you very much for the review! My intention is to write a very long novel so if everything goes well I will continue writing until my fingers hurt. The answer to your question is: Yes! But I'm still in doubt between a romantic couple or a small harem ;D

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    ตอบกลับถึง Gummybear912

    In total! That was a mistake on my part, I just fixed it, thanks for commenting!

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    ตอบกลับถึง Wolf_Savage_9952

    Thanks! ❤️

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    This is the first authorial work that I have written seriously and I come here to evaluate it shamelessly. XD I hope to have reviews that help me improve my way of writing and create increasingly exciting stories to the point of bringing some laughs and tears, on this journey of imagination that I set out to build. I'll try my best and I hope you enjoy this adventure!

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    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    eae mano ta traduzindo como teus capitulos? vi que tu escrevia em portugues ;v

    Ch 91 Chapter 91 — The Hostess
    Reborn as a snake
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    ตอบกลับถึง RcMartone

    Opa, obrigado! Vou colocar ;D

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    ตอบกลับถึง FVJWQIFVJWQIFVJWQI

    Mirko*

    Ch 15 Capítulo 14: Rotina de Camilly
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    ตอบกลับถึง ArdaPendragon

    No :/ but if you want some reference on what she looks like i was very inspired by mirku's appearance from boku no hero. Maybe in the future I'll commission someone to actually draw Camilly's appearance, but it depends on how the story goes and this is my first story so... we'll see in the future ;D

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    ตอบกลับถึง Shoggoth

    Corrigido ;D

    Sendo observado por um olhar tão ardente de admiração ele fica sem jeito e se apresenta: "Prazer em conhecê-la meu nome é Vlad sem sobrenome."
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    ตอบกลับถึง Shoggoth

    Kkkk vou corrigir, obrigado por lembrar

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    ตอบกลับถึง Shoggoth

    Opa, muito obrigado pelo comentário já vou corrigir.

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    ตอบกลับถึง SILLv

    Não acho que tenha tradutor no aplicativo, só usando no Google Chrome para ler em Português

    Ch 7 Capítulo 6: Plano C
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    ตอบกลับถึง JIM_MoriOg

    Tá tudo normal para mim

    Ch 1 Prólogo: Arrependimentos
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    ตอบกลับถึง ArdaPendragon

    this is the plan ;D

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    Espero que gostem da leitura! Essa é minha primeira história que eu escrevo então qualquer crítica construtiva é bem-vinda. Para Erros gramaticais só comentar no parágrafo que estarei estudando a estrutura para corrigir. Agradeço se apoiarem este autor iniciante

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    ตอบกลับถึง Cinvera

    Opa, fica tranquilo e obrigado pelo apoio!

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