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My first life was pretty meaningless, I woke up and did the same boring things every single day until the age of 18 when... I didn't wake up. What happened? Simple: I died and I met R.O.B. then everything changed. So guys, this will be a Harry Potter fanfic, I don't own Harry Potter and any of the characters besides my own.

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Harry Potter and the Fortunate Queen

“You will hear many of his Death Eaters claiming that they are in his confidence, that they alone are close to him, even understand him. They are deluded. Lord Voldemort has never had a friend, nor do I believe that he has ever wanted one,” Dumbledore told Harry Potter with absolute certainty. But what if Voldemort did have a friend? Not just a friend but the friend? A millennia-old wizard, who learned the secret of Hogwarts from the great Four founders, and had his own goals to take over the world? To stop that ancient wizard, an ancient power is called upon . . . in the form of a girl. A Muggle-born at that. Christina Norton has powers beyond anyone's imagination but she is too caught up in the Chosen One Harry Potter's life and catastrophes. But as she starts to uncover the plans of Voldemort, she realizes someone else is working with him. Someone who wants her dead. Why? She doesn't know. She just knows she has to save her loved ones and Hogwarts from Malgino and for that she is ready to go to the end of the world. And fight whoever comes in her way. Warning: It was my first book, so the first volume is going to be a bumpy ride. Things start to change at the end of the second volume, so if you can hang in there till then, welcome. Disclaimer: I neither own the original Harry Potter book series (I mean y'all already know that but still) nor the book cover (I guess I edited it but it doesn't count). If you want to support me: https://ko-fi.com/thewordsiren

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This review was written at Ch 13 Writing Quality: The author has mentioned that English is not they're first language, but proves that they are decently fluent. There are some minor errors here and there, most of which is the erratic changes in POV, but I've not found anything more dire than that. 4/5 Story Development: I feel that the pace is decent - not too fast nor too slow. The changes the MC has made hasn't shown any consequences yet as far as I've seen. The story is still in its infancy, so there's not much to say. 4/5 Character Design: As typical of wish fulfillment stories, the MC is a Gary Stu. Of course, that was already expected going in, so it's not a problem to me personally. The MC's family was structured with the use of typical clichés, which I feel the author made use of splendidly. Said family feels organic, and I applaud that. The most important thing though is the changes in Harry. Finally having a friend who is also a great role model does wonders for him. I await what their interactions will be like once Voldemort shows himself. I think the MC's course of action will be to train Harry, because he somehow feels responsible for him. We'll see though. 4/5 Updating Stability: I don't really know what to say here. I literally binged through to the most recent chapter (Ch 13) so I don't have any opinions. From what I've seen, the author uploads at least a chapter every two days, so that's something. 4/5 World Background: Both the easiest and most difficult thing about writing fanfiction is that there is already an established world lore. On one hand, you don't have to worry about making any plot holes that aren't already there and well known to the community. On the other hand, there's a standard that the community all agree is undisputable: and that is history. Most know that Merlin predates Hogwarts by at least a few hundred years. You could argue that Merlin used magic to place items for the MC within Hogwarts, but it's a weak excuse in my opinion. Though it doesn't really detract from the story, so I believe it doesn't matter much. 3/5 TL;DR - It's pretty good. Looking forward to more. 👍

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