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Wizard Reborn

Lord_Potter
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MrMortiger
MrMortigerLv1

Why???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

2yr

monke6
monke6Lv4

why did u delete all the chapters? ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

2yr
KaiserXIII
KaiserXIIILv11

This review was written at Ch 13 Writing Quality: The author has mentioned that English is not they're first language, but proves that they are decently fluent. There are some minor errors here and there, most of which is the erratic changes in POV, but I've not found anything more dire than that. 4/5 Story Development: I feel that the pace is decent - not too fast nor too slow. The changes the MC has made hasn't shown any consequences yet as far as I've seen. The story is still in its infancy, so there's not much to say. 4/5 Character Design: As typical of wish fulfillment stories, the MC is a Gary Stu. Of course, that was already expected going in, so it's not a problem to me personally. The MC's family was structured with the use of typical clichés, which I feel the author made use of splendidly. Said family feels organic, and I applaud that. The most important thing though is the changes in Harry. Finally having a friend who is also a great role model does wonders for him. I await what their interactions will be like once Voldemort shows himself. I think the MC's course of action will be to train Harry, because he somehow feels responsible for him. We'll see though. 4/5 Updating Stability: I don't really know what to say here. I literally binged through to the most recent chapter (Ch 13) so I don't have any opinions. From what I've seen, the author uploads at least a chapter every two days, so that's something. 4/5 World Background: Both the easiest and most difficult thing about writing fanfiction is that there is already an established world lore. On one hand, you don't have to worry about making any plot holes that aren't already there and well known to the community. On the other hand, there's a standard that the community all agree is undisputable: and that is history. Most know that Merlin predates Hogwarts by at least a few hundred years. You could argue that Merlin used magic to place items for the MC within Hogwarts, but it's a weak excuse in my opinion. Though it doesn't really detract from the story, so I believe it doesn't matter much. 3/5 TL;DR - It's pretty good. Looking forward to more. 👍

3yr
Bookcultivater
BookcultivaterLv4

It's just started but it's going well so far. FILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

3yr
Giovanni_D
Giovanni_DLv4

...............................exp3.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

3yr
Rajat_Sharma_0663
Rajat_Sharma_0663Lv1

Well it's nice Story....and I like that you didn't put mc like others in Reven claw....I mean, man every fan fic I saw was either on mc in Raven claw and doing this and that experiment. Please continue the story and don't drop it.

3yr
DaoistK5YRj2
DaoistK5YRj2Lv1

Can anyone recommend a similar op story with Hermione as the love interest? About this one, the story is pretty good but I can't actually say much as author was typically like teleporting, everything went really fast, while the author kept assuring that he will slow the pace when Fourth year comes and that that will be when the story will actually start....... But.... Just when the Fourth Year actually started..... guess what? The author went on Hiatus!!! I am just speechless........ Well can't do anything about it, please just recommend me a good one.....

2yr
Faibani
FaibaniLv1

its a laid back story about op mc but its still realy nice to read. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

3yr
Nick_Cline
Nick_ClineLv11

Its been like 6 months, this needs to be pushed down off of the popular tag. Its been like 6 months, this needs to be pushed down off of the popular tag.

2yr
vinay_saini_1146
vinay_saini_1146Lv3

It was pretty high up in popular filter so I wanted to push it down. It was pretty high up in popular filter so I wanted to push it down. It was pretty high up in popular filter so I wanted to push it down.

2yr
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