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Bookcultivater
BookcultivaterLv43yr
2021-12-08 08:25

It's just started but it's going well so far. FILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

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Ballad
BalladLv5

Let's Hope it's not another I must fix the wizarding world and save Harry and Sirius trash 🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️ that's been overdone so many times.

RuberDF
RuberDFLv5

I hope he's not gonna use the wand... at all!

BigReader500
BigReader500Lv3

Another muggle loving mc not dissing the work but i am just frustrated not finding a single work with a mc who actually sees the muggles for the threats they are. I am just tired of the same old wine in a new bottle I guess.

Bookcultivater
BookcultivaterLv4

muggles are just human just as wizards are human both can be equally bad as good

BigReader500:Another muggle loving mc not dissing the work but i am just frustrated not finding a single work with a mc who actually sees the muggles for the threats they are. I am just tired of the same old wine in a new bottle I guess.
BigReader500
BigReader500Lv3

To be honest with you once humans discover a species superior to them their first instinct will be to dissect and study them that's just how we are and i am tired of all these muggle friendly wizards.

Bookcultivater:muggles are just human just as wizards are human both can be equally bad as good
romeotango148
romeotango148Lv14

Frankly find myself disappointed that the part i read up to has all the hallmarks of yet another OP self insert sidekick to Harry. Would be much more interesting if MC wasnt playing tag along to the canon characters and decided to go their own way

dozkiller07
dozkiller07Lv4

it's true.but that doesn't mean wizard should go bat shet crazy over them. and muggle born wizards are wizards so they shouldn't descriminate them saying muggles.

BigReader500:To be honest with you once humans discover a species superior to them their first instinct will be to dissect and study them that's just how we are and i am tired of all these muggle friendly wizards.
BigReader500
BigReader500Lv3

I think there was a work in fan fiction called savior of magic read it long ago. They had the perfect solution that Harry supported. One of the best Ho fanfics out there that one.

dozkiller07:it's true.but that doesn't mean wizard should go bat shet crazy over them. and muggle born wizards are wizards so they shouldn't descriminate them saying muggles.
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KaiserXIIILv11

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