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Utopian System

"Mana to breathe, mana to eat, mana to fucking live," Inhale: -0.001 MP… oops! You're out of mana points. (Pay-to-breathe RPG.) Humanity's last walled stronghold. _____ In the world Elio lives, every gasp of air comes at a price. A floating indestructible book for every human, a magical system that turns survival into a pay-to-breathe RPG. Here, poverty isn't just being broke, it's choking. Surrounded by barren land and a sea of monsters on top of it (No water, just literal monsters), each day is a suffocating dance of survival, a balancing act between mana for air and mana for food. In this economy, holding your breath isn't just a game, it's a retirement plan. Driven by desperation (and the city's miserly rulers that don’t cut anyone a break), Elio dives into the Book System’s trials to save his family. Along the way, he unlocks powers he didn’t ask for and starts to figure out... Who he really is. Immerse yourself in an adventure where one young man's stubborn refusal to become a statistic could spark a revolution. Who knew being a pain in the system's rear could change the world? Because in Elio's world, breathing is just the beginning of the revolution and... he's gasping for change. But hey, who said saving the world had to be all doom and gloom? Join Elio as he kicks monster butt, uncovers ancient secrets, and maybe, just maybe, figures out how to grow a tree or two along the way. __________ Warning: May contain traces of world domination, an unhealthy obsession with the periodic table, damage points, progression math, and yes, even a sprinkle of that old "power of friendship" magic. Because sometimes, you need a buddy to help you remember which element does what or even help you calculate those sweet, sweet stats. A quick heads-up: Despite what the cover might suggest, this isn’t a hack-and-slash adventure. Think more along the lines of a turn-based RPG, where strategy and choices matter as much as action. Get ready for a different kind of challenge! If you want to know more about the cover: Yep, that's our first FL crying and crossing the transparent barrier straight into a pixelated, indistinguishable sea of monsters. Because why not mix emotions with chaos? She's crazy like that! (Not really... or is she?) Discord to check the visuals: https://discord.gg/W3CjfC2cw4 I’m still working on it in the little moments I find between writing, editing, making more character images, etc. Little by little, we’ll have a Poked... uh, a full SummonDex! Meanwhile, you can check out the ones on Fandom with their... funny descriptions? Or at least I hope so... orz __________ Last Month of easy Win-Win Challenge! (11/2024) Warning: Critical Win-Win Quest Alert! "Last month's Win-Win raid: 400/1000 party members showed up. Not bad, but hey, who wants to settle for 'not bad' when we could go for 'absolutely freaking awesome'?" Here's what you'll get if you help us reach these goals: FINAL MONTH WIN-WIN QUEST REWARDS: Main Quest Completion (1000/1000 privilege chapters): Drop rate of 10 extra chapters from my secret stash! (End of month loot box, if you will) Legendary Castle gift: +5 chapters per drop (Max stack: 10 chapters. Sorry, can't break the game balance TOO much!) Power Stone Achievement [500 weekly]: Unlocks weekly bonus content (+1 chapter/week buff) Golden Ticket Milestone [1000]: Critical success! +5 chapter mega drop Because sometimes you need a party to help you grind those sweet, sweet chapter rewards. And hey, who said supporting your favorite stories had to be all serious business? Thank you so much for all your support so far! Thanks for not letting this story become just another "Game Over" screen! Let's make this last Win-Win month worth writing about! No elephants or whales were harmed in the making of this reward system... unless they really, REALLY wanted to help!

Dagzo · แฟนตาซี
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Chapter 5: System's Decision

Elio emerged from the trial, his mind still buzzing with the excitement of his recent victory over the Water Monster. However, one thought crossed his mind: what had they done with his Book while he was inside?

Normally only its owner can touch the floating book, exceptions being when the owner is dead or in a trial. The book is, as everything God makes, indestructible. Even so… 

Don't tell me, Varick had…

As the swirling vortex of the trial faded, Elio found himself not on the familiar recruitment platform, but in a lavishly appointed office. Rich tapestries adorned the walls, and intricately carved wooden furniture filled the room. 

Each piece, Elio realized with a start, could be exchanged at trading statues for amounts of mana that made his head spin. Some weren't even in the trading options he knew

Normally, challengers simply exited onto the recruitment platform after each challenge to log their times, but to his surprise, Elio found himself somewhere else. 

Seated behind an enormous desk sat Von Lucien, the Summoner's piercing gaze fixed upon him. The small frog that seemed to be the man's constant companion blinked lazily from its perch atop his head.

"Ah, young Elian," Von Lucien said, a sly smile playing at the corners of his mouth. "I'm pleased to see you've emerged victorious from the second challenge. Though I must say, you've done so with remarkable speed."

Elio blinked, his mind still reeling from the abrupt change in surroundings. "Sir, I don't understand. Why am I here instead of at the recruitment platform? And... what happened to my System's Book while I was inside?"

Von Lucien leaned back in his chair, his long fingers idly stroking the frog on his head. "Let's just say I took certain... precautions to ensure your book didn't suffer any unfortunate accidents."

Elio's brow furrowed as understanding dawned. "Varick," he breathed, anger flaring in his chest.

"Indeed," Von Lucien nodded. "I deduced that my dear nephew might attempt some juvenile act of revenge. Perhaps tossing your book into a pile of leftover food before you finished your trial. And given the immense authority the two privileged families wield within the army, he could easily persuade a guard to look the other way."

The Summoner's lip curled in distaste. "So I intervened. I requested your book be delivered to me for safekeeping, and I would personally log the time of your emergence. Or, in the unfortunate event of your book disappearing, record your... untimely passing."

Elio swallowed hard, a mix of gratitude and unease churning in his stomach. "Thank you, sir. I... I hadn't even considered that possibility."

Without his intervention, he'd have had to bathe for a few hours.

"No doubt you had other concerns weighing on your mind," Von Lucien said, watching the little frog hop from his head onto the desk. "Now then, tell me about your encounter with the Water Monster. I must admit, I'm intrigued by the swiftness of your victory. Most challengers spend hours wearing the creature down before they can land a killing blow."

Elio nodded, recalling the trial. "It was thanks to my father's teachings, sir. He prepared me for the challenge."

Von Lucien nodded approvingly. "He must have been a wise and insightful man… Please, elaborate on your strategy."

Taking a deep breath, Elio recounted his battle with the monstrous frog. He described how he'd tricked the frog into getting caught in mid-air to how he used his own Sacred Flame ability to create a droplet of water to lure the monster into a trap.

As he spoke, Von Lucien's expression grew increasingly animated. When Elio finished, the Summoner let out a booming laugh that startled the frog on his desk.

"Brilliant, lad! Absolutely brilliant!" Von Lucien exclaimed, his eyes twinkling with a mixture of amusement and... was that pride? "You remind me so much of... Well, never mind that. I must say, I'm eager to see how you fare in the challenges to come."

Elio felt a knot form in his stomach at those words. Steeling himself, he decided to seize the moment. "Sir, before the trial, you mentioned you'd be willing to reveal secrets about summoning if I overcame this challenge. Does that mean...?"

Von Lucien's mirth faded, replaced by a calculating look. He studied Elio for a long moment, as if weighing some internal decision. Finally, he shook his head slowly.

"No, young Elian. I will not give you that information. Not yet."

Disappointment crashed over Elio like a wave, but before he could protest, Von Lucien raised a hand to silence him.

"Your father, no doubt, told you about the third level of the Book System," the Summoner continued, his tone grave. "To overcome it, you must accrue at least one thousand mana points, a task that will take you a minimum of seven months. Even then, there is only a 40% chance of survival."

Elio nodded stiffly, his father's… warnings about the danger of the third level echoing in his mind. One thousand mana points for the disposable fire sword... It was a fortune that could save his family's life. Also, the prospect of only a 40% chance of success made his blood run cold.

"Most people do not take the risk," Von Lucien went on. "After completing the ten-year army service, the twenty mana points per day one receives can provide a relatively decent life. It's a safer path, Elian. One that ensures your family's stability, if not their prosperity."

The Summoner leaned forward, his gaze boring into Elio. "If you cannot pass the third level, the information you seek would be useless to you. More than that, it could be dangerous. So for now, I suggest you think carefully before making your decision."

Elio swallowed hard, feeling the weight of Von Lucien's words settle on his shoulders. Was it worth risking everything, his life, his family's future, for the possibility of gaining this knowledge? Or would it be wiser to settle for the twenty daily points awaiting him after his service?

Von Lucien seemed to read his thoughts. "Go to your new quarters, room 1515, and meditate on this, young Elian. Do not take this decision lightly, for the consequences could be grave, not just for you, but for those who depend on you too."

With a click of his fingers, he summoned a guard to escort Elio out of the office. 

The walk to his new lodgings passed in a daze. Elio's mind whirled with the possibilities and pitfalls that lay before him. When they reached the barracks, he found himself standing before a modest but comfortable quad room.

Collapsing onto the nearest bed, Elio buried his face in his hands. The temptation of Von Lucien's offer gnawed at him. What secrets lay hidden behind the veil of summoning? What power could he gain if he dared to reach for it?

But the risk... Elio's stomach churned at the thought. A 60% chance of failure meant more than just his own death. It meant leaving his family without the support of those twenty daily points. It meant his mother's sacrifice, that precious 100 mana point crystal she'd scraped together over two years, would have been for nothing.

Elio rolled onto his back, staring up at the ceiling. The memory of his mother's face, filled with pride and hope as she handed him that crystal, brought a lump to his throat.

"What should I do?" he whispered to the empty room. "Risk everything for a chance at a better future? Or play it safe and settle for a life of... adequacy?"

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