The Last Rising Sun

Meatballs 1 pound ground beef ½ pound ground veal ½ pound ground pork 2 cloves garlic, minced 2 eggs 1 cup freshly grated Romano cheese 1 ½ tablespoons chopped Italian flat leaf parsley salt and ground black pepper to taste 2 cups stale Italian bread, crumbled 1 ½ cups lukewarm water 1 cup olive oil Directions Step 1 Combine beef, veal, and pork in a large bowl. Add garlic, eggs, cheese, parsley, salt and pepper. Step 2 Blend bread crumbs into meat mixture. Slowly add the water 1/2 cup at a time. The mixture should be very moist but still hold its shape if rolled into meatballs. (I usually use about 1 1/4 cups of water). Shape into meatballs. Step 3 Heat olive oil in a large skillet. Fry meatballs in batches. When the meatball is very brown and slightly crisp remove from the heat and drain on a paper towel. (If your mixture is too wet, cover the meatballs while they are cooking so that they hold their shape better.)

It's pretty good!! But it lacks more OPPAISSSSSS! Full HAREM MODE! PLUS ULTRA!!!! [img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Review given after reading 24 chapters. Writing quality - 3/5 - Pretty sad to see the quality of writing, using he for both males and females. Story Development - 4/5 - Pretty decent but find it bland. Hinata and MC were friends, but after death of MC's family, he (MC) became a loner and thus started an awkward development between MC and Hinata (I know that Hinata is timid but still hope a bit OOC to develop harmony in team would have been great, still hope that after the B-rank mission things change). MC continually being verbally mocked by Ino was simply sad and pathetic even tho Author may have tried to make it seem that MC is apathetic and indifferent, but I do think seeing MC continually stab a villain would open her eyes to reality. Character Design - 3/5 - Sorta bland MC but has hair trigger to someone who wants to kill him. Updating Stability - 3/5 - Not sure thus giving average rating. World Background - 4/5 - Naruto World but there was mention of OC that was able to cover an Entire Village in a Genjutsu (Seems a bit unrealistic but roll with it). Overall - 3.6/5 - Have to say it is an Okay~ read.

i find that the story took a bad turn when the author chose to kill the mc family (the mc family isn't even from the uchiha), the only reason i can see is that it was for the drama and the justification of an emo mc.

Good novel, the grammar is good too. I just don't understand, how can you mess up pronouns so badly. And it's not a one time thing, the pronouns are messed up in every single sentence. At this rate I will have no choice but to change my gender.... That's how bad it is.

The plot is a story spelled out well. Well, the mc looks too boring, I personally am not interested in reading about a hero on whom even Sasuke Uchiha looks like a Guru of social activity.

hey author when are you correcting the genderbended words like when you are talking about MC you will sometimes use 'she/her' and when talking about girl character you use 'he/his'

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Powiem tak jeden z lepszych powieści jakie czytałem z Universum Naruto fabuła dobra główną postać no co powiedzieć choć pokręcona to jest bardzo dobra czekam na więcej <3

Very good story. It feels like a completely different story than the original Naruto because the way the author made the mc is so good we follow him through his journey and hardships. The emotions shown by the characters is also very good as I shed some tears while reading it.

Very good, it was really a good read GOOD GOOD GOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOOD

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Firstly, I am grateful to the author for having a Spanish version of this Fic. The story catches you throughout its development and entertains, a bit of OC or that does not appear in the canon but it gives an interesting touch to the story. Romantic interests are good and few, luckily it's not the typical Huge Harem. Although the beginning can be a bit confusing and you get a little annoyed by the lifeless attitude of the MC, at least it is developed a little for the better. In conclusion, I recommend it.

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author is there Yuri or ntr in it I hope not also author will mc take the girls with him or not please tell me

I was enjoying the story, but i saw the author reply to someones comment on a chapter, talking about how itll be a huge harem of like 30 girls. Really man? That ruined the whole thing for me