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2022-07-02 19:33

Review given after reading 24 chapters. Writing quality - 3/5 - Pretty sad to see the quality of writing, using he for both males and females. Story Development - 4/5 - Pretty decent but find it bland. Hinata and MC were friends, but after death of MC's family, he (MC) became a loner and thus started an awkward development between MC and Hinata (I know that Hinata is timid but still hope a bit OOC to develop harmony in team would have been great, still hope that after the B-rank mission things change). MC continually being verbally mocked by Ino was simply sad and pathetic even tho Author may have tried to make it seem that MC is apathetic and indifferent, but I do think seeing MC continually stab a villain would open her eyes to reality. Character Design - 3/5 - Sorta bland MC but has hair trigger to someone who wants to kill him. Updating Stability - 3/5 - Not sure thus giving average rating. World Background - 4/5 - Naruto World but there was mention of OC that was able to cover an Entire Village in a Genjutsu (Seems a bit unrealistic but roll with it). Overall - 3.6/5 - Have to say it is an Okay~ read.

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