I'm moving the book to Kindle Vella. It's being edited and the story will have lots of changes. I'll fix some of the problems it has there.
How did you like chapter 2?
Just to let you know.
I am writing this as part of a Writing formula practice. If you like the book, please let me know with spirit stones!
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Chapter two is edited. If you find any mistakes, please let me know.