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An amazing world of cultivation. A majestic world where miracles happen. There is a warrior who defies destiny and forge his own path facing innumerable difficulties ahead. Come and join the life of the person who will go against the set destiny of the cruel world and become something extraordinary. ===== Extraordinary my foot. What is this illogical cr*p? Does it even make sense? If you are doctor, then work in a hospital. What the hell are you doing going after girls? If you are a commander in the army, then bring your army to get revenge on those who wronged you. Why go through the trouble of pretending to be a weakling. You are a useless son in law? Your wife's family thinks you are good for nothing? Then how the hell did you score her in the first place?!!! If they like money so much and you are a hidden millionaire, then why in the name of sanity would you hide this fact and be berated every day?!!! The hell is all this?!!! The more I read it, the more illogical it becomes. Like this all came straight out of someone's as-- [Host, why don't you calm down?] 'You shut up!!! You're the reason I'm stuck here in the first place!!!!' [Host, you need anger management] 'THE FU*K DID YOU SAY?!!!!!' ===== Hello everyone! This is my second novel and so far, nothing is decided. This is just an idea that has been plaguing my mind for quite a long time and I decided to let it out and let you guys decide whether or not I should work on it. Give it a proper read and let me know. You guys will decide the fate of this novel. Also, I would like you guys to come up with proper genres for this story. Bonus chapters: 150 PS for one chapter 300 PS for another chapter 20 GT for two chapters 50 GT for another two chapters 1 Review of 4 stars or above, 1 extra chapters Maximum extra chapters per week: 7 ===== The cover is A.I generated and is not mine. If the real owner would like me to remove it, let me know in any chapter comments. That's it. Enjoy!

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Chapter 1The Beginning

Chapter 1

It was a peaceful day in Yuan Yin city. Birds chirped while the people went to their everyday lives in the morning. Cars traveled on the road systematically and people walked on the side paths, busy with their own work. 

Just like the whole city, the Ruan Villa of the Ruan family was also peaceful in the morning because their young master usually slept at this time.

This wasn't the main villa of the Ruan family but a smaller one where the young master, the sole son of the Ruan family independently lived. Of course, the independence of a young master came with a lot of servants so even though he was the sole master of the house, there were hundreds of servants at his beck and call.

"Prepare the breakfast, Miss Lim." A gentle lady in her mid-forties asked the servant in charge of the kitchen duties, also known as Lady Lim.

"Of course, there are only two hours left until the young master wakes up, Miss Kang." Lady Lim replied to the gentle lady who was also the head maid of the villa, Xu Kang.

"Thank you for your troubles." Xu Kang gently replied and left to oversee other matters of the villa. The gardeners were peacefully doing their job. The laundry was also being peacefully done. Every matter of the villa was being carried out peacefully.

"Sigh…" Xu Kang heaved a long sigh, full of exhaustion. It wasn't because she hated peace but because she knew the said peace wouldn't last for long. There was just a little over an hour before their young master would wake up.

Once he does, nothing will remain peaceful. The peaceful cooking, gardening, laundry, and all other tasks of the villa would be interrupted. That was why even though everyone was working peacefully, they were also trying their best to do it fast.

"Hah… how can such a devil be the blood of the chairman and mistress?" She couldn't help but ask that question on a daily basis now. She would even ask it multiple times a day sometimes.

"Should I just retire before it gets out of hand?" She wondered to herself. Day by day, their young master was getting worse.

At first, they were just slight scoldings. Then it became a little harsh but there was nothing major. However, soon insults began to hurled out of his mouth. If that wasn't enough, physical scolding was also added to that list. It was slowly getting bad. If he found something wrong, he would complain about it severely. Sometimes, it would get physical and the victims would have to be hospitalized.

Everyone was afraid. Afraid of the day when the situation would get out of hand. Of course, it won't be a problem for the young master. He was the young master of the biggest family of the Yuan Yin city. Even if he killed thousands of common people, at most he would receive a slight scolding.

That was why, not only Xu Kang but most of the servants wanted to retire before something irreversible happened.

"FUUUUUUUCCCCCC*****KKKKKK!!!!!!!" Just as she was thinking this peacefully, a shout that shook her innards reverberated throughout the villa startling not only her but everyone who was working. Everyone, along with Xu Kang, thought completely terrified, "Is today finally the day something is going to happen?"

Xu Kang hurriedly left her spot and ran toward her young master's room. Even though she knew she was heading towards danger, she couldn't let anyone else take the brunt of the young master's anger.

"Miss Kang!" On the way, she ran into the head butler Chen Xian, who was also heading in the same direction as her.

"It could be dangerous. Please stay back." He instructed Xu Kang. Chen Xian was a man in his fifties but since he wasn't an ordinary human, Xu Kang was sure he could defend himself against the young master so she heeded his advice.

They both stopped outside the young master's room from where the sound of yelling could still be heard. They were both afraid of opening the door but they were worried about who was inside there with their young master.

"Who is in there?" Chen Xian asked Xu Kang quietly. She was also unaware of who was inside so she could only shake her head.

Chen Xian wasn't satisfied with that answer so plucking up some courage, he turned the knob of the bedroom and door and slowly turned it.

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While inside the room before Xu Kang and Chen Xian's arrival.

"Say that once again, you mothertucker!!!" A handsome young man, completely naked in his bed yelled at empty air as if yelling at the god.

[Host, you need to calm down]

A voice spoke inside of his head that no one other than him could hear.

"Calm down? CALM DOWN?!!! DO YOU THINK THIS IS SOMETHING I SHOULD BE CALM ABOUT?!!!" The handsome boy again yelled loudly while hitting the air aggressively.

[Look at the bright side host, you can have anything you want]

The voice that spoke inside of his head, sounded utterly terrified. It tried to placate the young boy by showing him the bright side but the young man only got angrier.

"I HAD EVERYTHING I WANTED BACK HOME!!! WHY WOULD I NEED TO COME TO THIS PLACE FOR THAT?!!!" The young man kept yelling non-stop. His anger didn't seem like it was going to go away any time soon.

[But… But host, its not like I am the one who brought you here]

The voice in his head defended itself with a tone overflowing with innocence.

"YOU MOTHERTUCKER!!! ACTING ALL INNOCENT. Then who is it? WHO IS THE ONE RESPONSIBLE?!!!!!" The young man's voice would go up and down in volume suddenly which confused the voice in his head.

[I… I am not sure, host]

[Maybe it was god]

"THEN BRING THAT GOD TO ME!!!!!" The young man yelled in response.

The voice in his head didn't know what to do in this scenario. It was at a complete and total loss so it decided to do the smart thing. Shut up and let the anger die down.

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This is the beginning. Let me know your thoughts after reading the next couple of chapters. 

I will upload the first five chapters over the time before tomorrow. Hope you like it and give feedback.

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MacharonniLv3

Decided to read it since it was free and luckily it was. Ignoring everything off putting with the Mc, his personality, and the system, it’s blatantly obvious that the author goes out of their way to nerf him multiple times. To awaken Qi he all of sudden has to earn 1 billion yuan and instead of converting stolen money to gold he end up leaving it because the author says he doesn’t need it right now. What exactly is the main premise of this novel?? Isn’t the whole point of him doing business and making money to get gold and beat the protagonist?? This Mc is supposedly some business savant in his previous life and all he does is kill and rob people. His businesses are even more of a joke and are forced asf. He has 1 year before he dies and he does what? Produce movies and games… But sure plot allows him to complete everything in a month. Like honestly, he inherits an entertainment company from his current body and he fires everyone from the beginning. At that point why even have an entertainment company at all, just make a completely different one or better yet just copy the company you had in your past life. Can’t say how frustrating it was to read this, the author tries making things intricate but ends up contradicting himself, adding in a bunch of things that don’t really help the story. I will say that the premise is somewhat novel in having an mc who doesn’t know the plot. However, the inclusion of him buying said plot via the system was definitely a mistake. Overall, good idea but it was a fumble.

30DegreeLv4

The synopsis was bait. I thought the story would break cliches or atleast make fun or play with it. But all I got was an occasional comment here and there on how garbage the orginal story was. I laughed a bit on the first chapter with him yelling at the system. When he walked out and bought suits on his underwear I thought he was a lunatic that doesn't take the world seriously but then it was revealed that he was supposed to be a business billioanaire and that he vauled his time a lot. So why did he do that? He could have just ordered someone to buy the suits its not like they took his measurements in the store he gave it to them and how did he even knew the size of the original body he was in? Then a lot of illogical things happened. They thought he was possed by an evil cultivator but no one even bothered to check they just accept it and move on that he became a completely person. Then he fell in love with one of the heroines out of nowhere (well it felt like that for me anyway) after that he started acting like a teen in puberty that doesn't know what love is. Then the crimes and trials which I will admit is entertaining but could have been completely avoided if he was smart enough. Killing three people in a motel like some sort of anti hero then leaving camera evidence? Anyway there were a lot of things that left me scratching my head but its ok because it was good junkfood. But all the little things pile up and I just ran out of patience to this story especially when I read the part that he will lose control of his body because of the original owner.

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