Chapter 60: Arrival on Corruscant

(A/n I'm back kiddos! For those that do not now what happened don't sweat it cause I had deleted the previous notice Chapter due to reasons that would affect me. To those that do know, my "circumstances" have improved and I am getting along fine. I was going to post a Chapter on Monday but I got inspired so I wrote out a plan for a different story before I forget it.

As a heads up on how long story is:

Star Wars fic - estimated 350 to 500 chapters

Skyrim fic - 500 to 1500 Chapters

Borderlands fic - around 150 to 250 Chapters

It's been about 4+ months since I started Star Wars and Borderlands and I feel uts taking to long to do im gonna be speeding it up, especially since I now have the time to do so. In addition to me doing only 3 fics instead of 5 at one time so ny writing speed and update rate will get faster.

Enjoy the Chapter and May the Force be with You, you Rebel Scum!)

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As QUI-GON was making his way back with ANAKIN, since he had asked to go to a connection booth to talk wigh an associate, he notices something out of the corner of his eye.

Suddenly, without breaking his stride, he ignites his laser sword, swing around, and lunges forward and cuts a lurking PROBE DROID in half.

QUI-GON inspects the sparking and fizzing DROID.

ANAKIN : A Probe Droid.

QUI-GON : Very unusual... not like anything I've seen before. Come on.

QUI-GON and ANAKIN start running with breakneck speed to the ship.

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EXT. TATOOINE - DESERT - NABOO SPACECRAFT - DAY

QUI-GON and ANAKIN run toward the Naboo spacecraft. ANAKIN is having a hard time keeping up.

Having heard something both ANAKIN and QUI-GON turns to answer and sees a DARK-CLOAKED FIGURE bearing down on a speeder bike, and next to it a Mandalorian Armoured Togruta.

ANAKIN rolled to the side just as DARTH MAUL speeds past him.

DARTH MAUL jumps off his speeder bike, and before he has hit the ground, the Sith Lord has swung a death blow with his laser sword that is barely blocked by QUI-GON.

ANAKIN start back up and saw the two galactic warriors, Sith and Jedi, are bashing each other with incredible blows.

They move in a continual cloud of dust, smashing everything around them within the fierce battle.

ANAKIN was about to help him but ignited his Lightsaber as he too had to block a lethal blow from the Mandalorian Togruta that attacked him from his rear, although the blow didn't have as much lethality put into it as the Sith Lord had done against QUI-GON.

ANAKIN: You?!

FULCRUM: Miss me? Let's have some fun shal we?

FULCRUM broke their saber clash with a Force Push that created distance between the two.

ANAKIN weilding a Blue Lightsaber with slight traces of Turquoise that trailed down the plasma blade.

And FULCRUM who weilded twin Red Lightsabers.

FULCRUM, aka AHSOKA, had been given artificial Red Kyber Crystals so that MAUL and SIDIOUS along with the Jedi order would assume she was a non-Banite Sith.

(A/n Banite Sith are Sith who follow the Rule of Two from Darth Bane's time. In Force Unleashed, Starkiller encountered a few of them, also Barris is a Non-Banite Sith during the Bombing Arc as she had no Master or Apprentice of her own, she was alone, a stray.)

ANAKIN knew that the person he was fighting was AHSOKA, his sister, he was annoyed with this encounter since he had lost many times to AHSOKA due to her speed which outclassed his own.

As for why the two were fighting, that was because ADRIAN had his own plans set up for the both of them and this fight was necessary before PADME arrived on Coruscant.

He put his hand to the ground resulting in a wall of sand to erupt and block her line of sight.

AHSOKA not wanting to allow him to obscure her vision, activated her infrared vision.

However, that proved fruitless as she had forgotten that the sands of Tatooine were so hot, as a result go being exposed to the heat of its Twin Suns, caused the sand to be so hot that everything showed up red on her H.U.D.

The delay this caused her to turn off her vision was enough for ANAKIN to leap over both sand wall and her while using the Force to manipulate the molecules in the surroundings to create some metallic chains that wrapped around AHSOKA's hands.

As ANAKIN landed, he sped towards her inetnfing to strike her on the shoulder and foece her to retreat and avoid capture.

But AHSOKA had quickly reacted and used Force Enhancement on her body, allowing her to break the chains and black ANAKIN'S attack.

She followed up her block with a flurry if offensive attacks that caused ANAKIN to go on the defensive.

He knew he would lose against AHSOKA's onslaught with twin Lightsabers against his single Lightsaber if this kept up.

ANAKIN raised his hand and stopped on of AHSOKA'S hands using his Telekinesis, using his Lightsaber hand he dropped it and sent a punch to AHSOKA'S gut.

His eyes widened as he himself had received a blow or more specifically, he had been kicked....in the balls.

After the two had struck each other, they took a few steps back whereas ANAKIN looked to be in some slight pain but that expression quickly faded.

Both of them had been physically enhanced thanks to ADRIAN'S various Serums he gave them.

Resulting in the both of them being so physically strong they can lift at least 2 Tons without any Force Enhancements to their body, strike with enough power to dent a steel wall and crack skulls and can endure being hit with a sledgehammer to head and only receive a slight headache.

And AHSOKA'S kick and ANAKIN'S punch right now was precisely that strong.

ANAKIN: Are you kidding me?!

AHSOKA: Why would I?

ANAKIN: Wait until we meet on Xixis Prime next time!

AHSOKA: I'm so scared Sky Guy.

ANAKIN: Shut up Snips!

Meanwhile, QUI-GON struggles to fend off the relentless onslaught as he contacts the ship.

QUI-GON : CAPTAIN have the ship take off now!

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INT. NABOO SPACECRAFT - COCKPIT

CAPTAIN PANAKA and PADME rush into the cockpit where OBI-WAN and RIC OLIE are checking the hyperdrive.

CAPT. PANAKA : Qui-Gon is in trouble, he says to take off!

PILOT : I don't see anything.

OBI-WAN : Over there! Fly low! In the distance is a small cloud of dust.

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EXT. TATOOINE - DESERT - NABOO SPACECRAFT - DAY

QUI-GON and DARTH MAUL continue theirsword battle. Leaping over one another in an incredible display of acrobatics, the two warrios hear the ship fly over them a few feet off the ground. QUI-GON almost dissapears for a moment.

Before DARTH MAUL knows what's happening, QUI-GON is on the spacecrat's ramp.

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EXT. TATOOINE - NABOO SPACECRAFT RAMP - DAY

The SITH LORD immediately jumps onto the ramp after QUI-GON, but barely makes it.

His heels hang over the edge of a forty-foot drop.

QUI-GON swings his laser sword with all his might and knocks DARTH MAUL off the ramp and onto the desert floor.

Just as he fell from the Spacecraft, ANAKIN had been able to jump and reach the ramp as it closes, and the Naboo craft rockets away, leaving the Sith Lord standing alone along with FULCRUM as the wath the sleek spacecraft rockets away from the planet Tatooine.

(A/n This happened in original but in movie just showed QUI-GON jump on ship and escape)

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INT. NABOO SPACECRAFT - HALLWAY

OBI-WAN and PADME rush into the hallway to find QUI-GON collapsed on the floor opposite the entry and ANAKIN standing having just entered the ship before the ranp closed.

ARTOO was looking over QUI-GON while the JEDI is breathing hard, wet with sweat and covered in dirt.

ANAKIN : Are you all right?

QUI-GON : I think so... that was a surpirse I wont soon forget.

OBI-WAN : What was it?

QUI-GON : I don't know... but both of our attackers was well trained in the Jedi arts. My guess is they were after the Queen...

ANAKIN : Do you think he'll follow us?

QUI-GON : We'll be safe enough once we're in Hyperspace, but I have no doubt they know our destination.

ANAKIN : It's too late for them now to pursue us. Once we enter Hyperspace, we will be long gone and on Corruscant. They wouldn't dare follow us there.

(A/n Image here of original OBI-WAN and ANAKIN first interaction in original version, LOL.)

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INT. COCKPIT - SPACE

RIC OLIE pulls back on the hyperdrive. OBI-WAN, QUI-GON, and ANAKIN watch.

QUI-GON : Let's hope this hyperdrive works and.

The stars streak outside the cockpit window as the ship streaks into hyperspace.

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INT. NABOO PALACE - THRONE ROOM - THEED - NIGHT

SEVERAL FEDERATION DROIDS patrol a deserted city street. The Palace could be seen in the distance as the moonlight that once gave a sense of beauty and tranquility now brought only sadness and fear to the people of Naboo.

Within the Throne Room of Naboo's Palace, NUTE GUNRAY sits in a strange, mechanical walking chair, which approaches SIO BIBBLE and SEVERAL OTHER NABOO OFFICIALS. RUNE follows a few paces behind.

DROID GUARDS surround SIO BIBBLE and THE OTHERS as FOUR COUNCIL MEMBERS watch.

NUTE : When are you going to give up this pointless strike? Your Queen is lost, your people are starving, and you, Governor, are going to die, much sooner than your people, I'm afraid. Take him away!

BIBBLE : This invasion will gain you nothing. We're a democracy. The people have decided... They will not live under your tyranny.

BIBBLE is taken away as OOM-9 approaches NUTE.

OOM-9 : My troops are in position to begin searching the swamps for these rumored underwater villages... they will not stay hidden for long.

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INT. NABOO SPACECRAFT - MAIN AREA

The ship is asleep. The lights are dim as PADME walks into the main room. She goes to a monitor and watches the BIBBLE plea recording.

JAR JAR is stretched out on the floor, snoring. ARTOO is to one side, cooing as he rests.

PADME appears tired. She senses someone watching her and turns around with a start. She sees ANAKIN sitting in the corner looking dejected.

She goes over to him. He looks up at her with tears in his eyes. He is holding his arms to keep himself warm.

PADME : Are you all right?

ANAKIN : Just thinking about my Mother. Just sad I couldn't go to see her yet.

PADME : You never told me much about her, even after all this time.

ANAKIN : Never really wanted to talk about it, I miss her when I think about it. We were slaves here on Tatooine before we were freed by my adoptive father.

PADME : This is the first time you ever mentioned your dad.

ANAKIN : Then I'll keep quite about it for now, I will be sure to have you meet them at some point. My dad...you probably won't see him for a few years.

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The two talked for a while until ANAKIN was able to sense PADME's emotions.

ANAKIN : You seem sad.

PADME : I am worried...scared. My people are suffering...dying. I have to, no I must convince the Senate to intervene, or...I'm not sure what will happen.

ANAKIN seemed to contemplate something before he makes up his mind and pulls something from his pocket.

ANAKIN : I made this some time ago. I carved it out of a japor snippet... It will bring you good fortune. Perhaps it can help when you, well...when SABE disguised as you, pleas Naboo's case to the Senate.

ANAKIN hands a wooden pendant to PADME. She inspects it, then puts it around her neck.

PADME : It's beautiful...thank you Ani, I'll keep with me, always.

She moves closer to him, wrapping her arms around and hugging him.

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INT. ICARUS - ADRIAN AND AVA'S ROOM

AVA: Awwww, that's so cute.

ADRIAN: It won't be when I ruin it by...

*Lightsaber ignites*

ADRIAN: Huh, did I say something? I don't seem to remember. Oh well! I care more about watching this with my lovely girlfriend and eventual-wife!

*Lightsaber depowers*

KARA: You coward.

*Gun clocks and is aimed at a Camera in the room*

KARA: Did I say something? Must be a glitch! Why would I antagonise my Master into damaging MY SHIP?

*Camera is shot and explodes*

KARA: NOOOO! MY SHIP! WHY DID YOU DO THAT?!

ADRIAN: You said this was YOUR ship, when it isn't cause I built it and owns it.

KARA: MOTHERF#^<£R!

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MOVE with the ship as it heads toward Coruscant.

The spacecraft dlies over the endlesscityscape of Coruscant, the capital of the galaxy.

The ship flies through the cityscape of Coruscant.

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EXT. CORUSCANT - SENATE LANDING PLATFORM - DAY

Supreme Chancellor VALORUM, SEVERAL GUARDS, and SENATOR PALPATINE stand on a landing platform.

The sleek Naboo spacecraft lands on the platform high above the street level of the galactic capital. The ramp lowers.

OBI-WAN, QUI-GON, JAR JAR and ANAKIN descend the ramp first and bow before PALPATINE and VALORUM.

CAPTAIN PANAKA, TWO GUARDS, QUEEN AMIDALA, then PADME, RABE, EIRTAE, and MORE GUARDS descend the ramp.

QUEEN AMIDALA stops before the group. ANAKIN and JAR JAR stand to one side, looking at the huge city.

PADME smiles at ANAKIN. PALPATINE bows before the Queen.

[AVA: Look at this Fucking old snake in Human skin! I'll get those shitty Lightsabers of his and shove it right up his-]

[ADRIAN: Quiet! Watch, they're gonna talk, hopefully it's going to work]

[AVA: What will work? What did you do?]

[ADRIAN: Something you won't be expecting that is for sure. Shh, they're talking!]

PALPATINE : It is a great gift to see you alive, Your Majesty. May I present Supreme Chancellor Valorum.

VALORUM : Welcome, Your Highness. It is an honor to finally meet you in person. I must relay to you how distressed everyone is over the currant situation. I've called for a special session of the Senate to hear your position.

AMIDALA : I am grateful for your concern, Chancellor.

PALPATINE starts to lead QUEEN AMIDALA and her RETINUE off the platform toward a waiting air taxi.

PALPATINE : There is a question of precedure, but I feel confident we can overcome it...

Before ANAKIN made it to the air taxi, he saw that QUI-GON had given him a look saying "We will meet again later".

He turned back and got into the air taxi along with the ithers as he is the Queen's bodyguard first and foremost.

JAR JAR start to follow, then stop, noticing that OBI-WAN and QUI-GON are staying with the SUPREME CHANCELLOR.

QUEEN AMIDALA waves to the JAR JAR to follow her group.

PALPATINE gives the Gungan and the boy in the back of the taxi a skeptical look, especially since ANAKIN looked to young to be protecting the Queen as a bodyguard.

But based on his report from his apprentice DARTH MAUL, he was definitely intrugued by the boy, eben if appearances don't do the boy justice with his power and skill.

JAR JAR leans over to ANAKIN.

JAR JAR : Da Queens- a bein grossly nice, mesa tinks. (he looks around) Pitty hot!

VALORUM and the JEDI watch the taxi move off into the city.

QUI-GON : I must speak with the Jedi Council immediately, Your Honor. The situation has become more complicated.

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I'll be trying to make 50 advance Chapters for my Star Wars and Skyrim fics so I can get ahead with them in the story and then have time to work on my other projects and finally start them.

Next chapter will be every 3 days max or every two days at least.

Cya next time, you Rebel Scum!