Star Wars: Empires rise and fall

Yeah, Shameless author, blah blah blah. So basically this Novel will result in my OC eliminating those who can use the force such as Jedi and Sith, OC is not able to use the force. Will hate the aliens amd they will be treated like such in warhammer. Humanity is great. Aliens are slaves. Heresy will result in purification vita fire and probably orbital bombardment. Praise The Emperor of Mankind. Screw the republic, Screw the False Empire made from Sheev, Empires rise and Empires fall… Marcus will witness it all. Did that Rhyme?

A random guy gets isekaied into star wars with some super OP cheats. Then he finds out he cant use the force and decides to start EMOgeddon by wanting to destroy the force itself (which would require him to kill all living things, as well as destroy EVERY planet in the galaxy, but hes too stupid to notice that).

Hmmm good start. i hope the author doesn't drop this novel................................................................................................

wow, evil MCs are boring, makes for easy writing. but this. this is a joke. no justification, no reasoning. just hot air. there is lazy writing then there is this. obviously its a prank to waste peoples time because this story has to be one of the worst I've read and its only a couple of chapters in. a record.The MC kills children because it gets him off. the author is definitely disturbed.

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Excellent story with great potential, the protagonist is quite good and constantly evolving, the plot is excellent and I hope it continues like this, the writing is average even if tending to high. I hope it continues like this because it is a really good story. So in conclusion I recommend everything.

mc reincanate in the star wars world mc is evil which is rare nowadays (true evil not these wannabe evil edgy posers so it give some fresh air) if you are the type to like hero/righteous mc/hate evil mc and killing this isn't for you so don't bother making a review also it don't have harem

Hello writer! beforehand I notice that there will probably be spelling errors in this comment (I'm Brazilian and my first language is Portuguese, I had help from Google translator). About the story: It's fun to read and I'm looking forward to the next few chapters. Thank you for writing this story. A few more particular comments if you're interested: I think the protagonist is a bit lacking in personality, just motivated by hate or whatever, I'm saying that because I feel like he might end up being uninteresting. (If it's something necessary for the base of the plot I can only wait, but I recommend giving a boost to his character, he's kind of simple) And I'm 100% in favor of Xenophobia against other species, I think this theme is very naive in star wars. And it would be interesting to somehow "convert" padme (I'm sorry if I seem intrusive in your novel, but she's one of my favorite characters in SWs) to the side of human "purity" and maybe put them as a romantic pair ( it might be interesting to add one more "competitor" to "spice up" things hahahahah). As for the rest of the galaxy for me they can burn.

it's really good I usually say it's good not great but not bad but this is really good. I still have to wright words to fill the dead space oh yeah The Will of Mankind is with you.

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Heh it a good read but wack commitment of mc since mc is someone who miss old life, and hate the force for not being born one and just by lack author save it by having mc tie down with the imperium conscious of god emperor so only killing xeno and jedi

more chapters pls ................................................................................................................................

i think this is a good facfic. I am not the biggest fan of star wars and know less about the universe but i could still keep it with story. KEEP UP GOOD WORK ! GOOD STUFF

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so far very decent story I really enjoy these darker mc types way to many goodie to shoes for my opion on here. hoping you can continue to write this one. Looking forward to galatic conquest

I know the author probably won't see this, but this was an amazing fanfic. I loved it. And I hope it will return in the near future.