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Rise of The Forsaken Ones

นักเขียน: RandomRohtua
Eastern Fantasy
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What is Rise of The Forsaken Ones

อ่านนิยาย Rise of The Forsaken Ones โดย ผู้เขียน RandomRohtua ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.(This is my entry into WPC#170 so if you like the direction of the story and/or find it interesting and would be willing to continue reading please use some power stones on it, the more I receive the ...

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(This is my entry into WPC#170 so if you like the direction of the story and/or find it interesting and would be willing to continue reading please use some power stones on it, the more I receive the more chapters I'll mass release) King lived most of his life alone in his orphanage but as he got older and found his first and maybe only love of his life Gaming it changed his trajectory at that very moment, what was previously a monotonous journey of school and helping around the orphanage turned into An adventure no one would believe unless they were there to experience it from Lone orphan to Peak Gaming Pro to One of the Greatest Cultivators of his Era become part of that remarkable journey today you won't regret it. Although it is my first webnovel i have a bit of writing experience in the past so bare with me as I shake off the rust along our journey together. Now on to the content of the story it is a cultivation novel I would recommend reading the prologue before starting because a bit of it will tie into an overarching plot within the story (no spoilers from me but I promise it is a twist you won't expect but will definitely appreciate) don't want to say too much here but if you enjoy the genre I can confidently say you will enjoy the story. P.S bear with me on the initial few chapters i've worked on them quite a bit but if I don't release them I'll never know how it is received by others I am already a harsh critique but we all have different tastes and interpretations so constructive criticism is welcome but I emphasize constructive there. P.S.S i don't own the cover art if it is yours please contact me to take it down I will soon have my own if you guys enjoy my novel as much as i enjoy writing it

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Violet Elanor, an unwanted orphan, desperately wished to live in Blackwell Mansion happily. Unfortunately, her eyes were brimming with tears… of suffering. After a president of a well-known conglomerate supposedly sought her out for a paternity test in secret, she assumed she would live in opulence like the rich patients in the mental asylum she came from. However, one of her stepbrothers assumed she was going to be their father’s fourth wife and the youngest stepmother they had ever seen so far. Annoyed, Violet played along with the misunderstanding and dug her own grave even deeper. What made matters worse was that their strict father always skirted around the subject on why she was going to live there and why they had to be kind and respectful towards her. Unfortunately, the step siblings had drawn their own conclusions and convinced themselves it was the truth. It turned out that that their father and her late mother had something going on before she disappeared on him without warning. Despite searching her whereabouts for years, the DNA test revealed that she wasn’t specifically his daughter but still the daughter of the woman he loved. Upon realizing that her mother was the reason for Mr. Blackwell and his second wife's divorce, the awkwardness she felt around their second son, Arthur, almost urged her to run away from Blackwell Mansion, never to be seen again. Should she return to the mental hospital or should she stay in the mansion and accept Mr. Blackwell's strange offer that she marry either one of his sons to ensure her bright future? Now, why would he arrange one of his children to marry a penniless orphan in the first place? If this was just a cruel prank, what would he do if she actually pursued the love she was craving for despite possessing a bizarre syndrome that nobody had even heard of? She wasn’t even sure if she could live past thirty once her brain tumor started growing again. Who would she even choose among the stepbrothers? Would it be the eldest, Liam, the workaholic CEO and heir of Blackwell Corporation, Arthur, the rebellious top high-fashion model of their generation or should it be Charlie, the moody yet genius artist behind the pseudonym ‘ishikawa’? Whatever. Shouldn't she find a job and earn some money first?

Cole_Ainge · สมัยใหม่
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Hunter: Tattoos Give Me Power

Warning!!!: This novel is HEAVILY inspired by other novels, so if you notice similarities, then don't come at me and give me hate, since I WARNED YOU, so if you didn't read this warning, it's you're problem! This story plays in Hungary, and almost every character is from Hungary, my dear home country! In the year 2022 dimensional portals opened up on Earth. Out of...*Sigh* You already know how it goes. I'm not gonna explain it... A cleaner is a 'lowly' occupation or that's what hunters say. A cleaner's job is to clean up the mess after the hunters who hunted down the monsters that came out of the dimensional portals. There are times when cleaners go into DPs with hunters who hired them to pick up valuable monster parts for them, the employment can go up to 100.000Ft, depending on the cleaner's experience. Going into portals as a cleaner can be extremely dangerous since cleaners don't have mana, so they can't conjure any kind of spells to protect themself, so a lot of them don't accept employment requests. But there is one particular cleaner that accepts every single employment request, and that is Rácz Vince. Vince has been a cleaner since the age of 16, and now he has 16 years of experience as a cleaner. As a veteran cleaner, who managed to survive without any kind of abilities in almost a hundred DPs he became a semi-famous person, and his employment costs 2 million forints, which for hunters is nothing big sum of money, for them it is just a pocket money for their children, but for regular people, it is a lot of money. So, now Vince is too a millionaire, and he has quite a luxurious life. But he's not happy at all. He quit secondary school just to become a hunter, have a lot of women, and have fun while becoming stronger and stronger. But he didn't awaken his mana. But, on a fateful day, he finally found out why he didn't awaken his mana, and that discovery changed his life for good. 1000 Words/Chapter The upload schedule will be probably random.

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meixiaolian
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The author is great with the description of words. I like when the author wrote "Bintendo64, Buper Bario Bros and Bonkey Kong" haha. If you, a reader that is into action and adventure, give this book a try!

RedAdam04
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I'm gonna be honest here. I don't mean any disrespect to the other. The writing quality is good. There's nothing wrong with the stability of updates and the story development has a lot of deep meaning and long-term character maturity. It is not slow and written in the simplest form. I recommend for the editors to take this novel and adapt it. I'm sure the writer's quality content will improve. As a fellow contestant, I do believe this deserves the top 5 spot.

TaintedMetal
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The novel talks about King Johnson (which is a notable easy name to remember tbh) and his adventures following his transmigration to what appears to be another world altogether. Themes like transmigration, reincarnation to some degree and fantasy elements and worlds would be familiar for readers of this genre. THE GOOD - This is probably the first transmigration novel in a while that I've gotten to know about the protagonist beyond just 1 chapter. Most novels like this go way too fast in having the MC die and then transfer for a new body, but here, the author takes their time in giving us a glimpse at King, who he is, who were the people in his life, and what came to be prior to his transfer to a new body and world. - Chapters 1 and 2 have a good flow. Chapter 1 is a glimpse of King's unfortunate situation at prom night with his girlfriend Casey, then transitions to chapter 2 where they break up due to King's dedication (based on his speech) to venture into gaming, which disappoints her greatly. - Chapter 3 is unique because most novels that have the MC moving into a new body just go there, but here? King has a conversation with a supposed figure who would be the new body King would later inhabit (I believe) - Chapters 4-10 have a good amount of telling and showing world building elements. Idea wise I can see what this novel wishes to tackle on. In addition, King also has some interactivity with the world, allowing us the reader to paint the picture in essence: imagine everything through his eyes. He's very much aware of the world he's in, and that deserves a praise. What might need some rework Note: this part of the review is derived from the current state of chapters, and I do believe that the author is currently doing rework as of this review being written. - Chapters 1 and 2 have a good flow overall in terms of moving from one chapter to another. However, the telling of Casey and King first meeting including their relationship seem very fast paced, too fast for me to grasp their characteristics. Their dialogue, despite having a good amount of grammar, is equally fast paced in a seemingly rushed way. - While on the subject of Chapter 2, the fight scene between Derek and King after the former acted like a jerk to Casey? Unfortunately it was too fast. At only 2 paragraphs the fight scene blitzed past by me faster than a bullet train or even Sonic the Hedgehog on Redbull. I can understand the need to get straight to the point in the story, but a little bit more length into the fight including imagery (like how bad were the punches/kicks) and maybe some trashtalking dialogue in between would have been more of a "showing" scene of a fight. Same goes for the aftermath of the fight, what happened with witness accounts and Mother Olivia was too fast. I think it's best to make them longer with more dialogue. - While the reasoning behind King's breakup with Casey is logical, the overall execution is a bit awkward. Maybe it's just me, but I feel they were talking in an AI style of speech. There were words, but I didn't really sense the emotion. - Chapters 5-10: The content is good, but I feel there should be more showing than telling. Telling is good to summarize some things, but perhaps parts where King learns about the types of places in this world, it could have been shown via dialogue like the butler teaching him, or his parents teaching him. Conclusion: This is a novel with good ideas overall, from start to finish. Said ideas and structure is clear from King's life and his situation following his transmigration. However, many parts related to the world building have a lot of telling, and in some cases particularly the early chapters things are a bit to fast paced. I trust the author is doing their absolute best in order to make this story have the best reading experience for the audience. The ideas are there and the execution for the most part is fine, but it will be even better once you have all of the things I have mentioned worked out. What you're doing good: keep at it. What needs to be fixed in order to make it better: take your time on it. I look forward to reading this novel again when it has its edits and to see what else plays out for King and his journey.

champilyn
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Although there are some grammatical erRor, the plot looks promIsing. the author should work on breaking some of the paragraphs For ease of reading for the readers. Other than thaT, keep up the good work! Please continue writing this awesome story! 😆

RandomRohtua
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Shamelss author Review back at it again ;) Honestly if you enjoy cultivation novels I believe you’ll enjoy mine there won’t be a lot of MC saves girl and earns ire of entire sect or MC spares his Opponent because the plot requires it if i had to Choose one word to describe the MC it would likely be pragmatic. I’m finally writing this after debating on doing it for so long and i’m using this WPC as motivation if you guys enjoy Reading this as much as i enjoy writing it i promise it’ll be an exhilirating ride to say the least.

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