Rise of the Crusader

Author here. I want to thank you all for the support, it means so much to me. Thank you. I see MVA as a very unique story because I did my best to improve my writing quality style, thought well about it before I began writing and every critique which was stated was worked on. Of course, if there are more, please feel free to let me know. And while they are only a few chapters and the release rate is not all that much, that's for a small amount of time. Also, the question of whether or not MVA will be a harem novel, I have always avoided that question because I assumed I was only spoiling things, but I'm going to let it out now, the answer is no. The MC will not have a Harem. A romance subplot and love interest is considered, but that's all, no Harem. Thanks for reading, and I hope to see you in the future.

First review I’ve ever done on a novel after reading quite a few. This novel I feel is only getting started . Originally I thought the main character was going to be an emotionless villain who only cares about himself but as the story continues we can slowly see him being more expressive. I also quite like how this romance has its up and downs and isnt just a Mc and mindless fl. I usually like books with harem aspect but this one has me invested to the point I paid for all locked chap. Wouldn’ mind harem tho, would feel bad if aurora is thrown aside . I feel at some point soon mc will also have a very dinamic change as far as emotions and personality goes. What we know of him is still a mystery which I would like to see slowly start to unravel. We know he has a impressive family background which is being hinted at constantly. I do hope that it doesn’t turn out like a cultivation novel where we have to wait 2000 chaps for it to happen. Overall will keep reading this book , normally not the type to read urban novels due to how short they tend to be compared to fantasy. would like to see more descriptive details about side characters as a refresher to what they look like .

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Probably not going to read since there’s no harem, but I do appreciate you telling the readers that it’s not harem unlike other authors who say “Read to find out 🤓”

Great novel, the premise of it is good. The Grammer could use some work and some parts could be further refined to explain things better and fill in the few plot holes, but overall the story is very good

Read up to 200 chapters Writing Quality - Well-written novel that does not have many noticeable grammar mistakes. Dialogue between characters are good and have variety to them based on characteristics of the people speaking. Stability of Updates - New chapters look like they are being released in a consistent manner. Story Development - The novel's pacing is on the slower end but still remains enjoyable for the reader to follow the story of the main character as we learn and uncover the mysterious background he comes from. The novel steers away from some common troupes seen in other similar superhero novels and excels in telling a captivating story that has the reader anticipating for what is coming in the future. Character Design - Good character design ranging from the main protagonist to side characters in the academy. Characters are memorable and fleshed out with their own problems to deal with. I am looking forward to how you will develop them more in later chapters. World Background - The novel revolves around a society of people with superhuman abilities with a broad scope of abilities that are possible. Additional expansion of the existing world would be nice and introductions to organizations could be improved on. Overall, a decently well-written novel that I am looking forward to continuing at a later date. I hope that this novel gets more attention that it deserves and maintains the quality of writing it currently has right now.

Haven‘t even read this but as an Overwatch Fan the Title is a must read for me(crusaders and stuff)

beautiful story. I like the fact that the mc remains mysterious. The world seems to be more complex than I thought at the start of the novel. I like romance, have mercy on me, no harem please Sorry for my mistakes English is not my native language

What happened to the updates

Great book. Would recommend to read if you like the tags.

Nice concept good worldbuilding and a real character instead of the factory made mcs we getting

Well, here are my thoughts, my friends. Overall the story is quite good and gives you a pleasant experience. The Mc is not only smart but also has the strength to back it up. I can't wait to see him grow and fight a group of students of the hero academy. I hope this story continues because have a lot of potential to go over the hundreds of chapters. Keep up the good work. Praise to the all-mighty author

Good novel so far

Author Why must you get me hooked and it isn’t even in the 17th chapter Amazing story I love the kind of duo personalities with when he is using his power and not using his power. I love sadistic characters who are really smart so this story is kind of in my favorites of all time. On the f###ing 16th chapter.

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I see that you choose Zero from Drakengard 3 for the cover, which is one of my favorite game… This is why I will read your story aha

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The story is very interesting. Early on everything is black-and-white clear-cut but as the story progresses things get Blurred and it’s cool too see how the MC Interacts with the Characters