If you write harem, at least make it make sense, you fucking monkey
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Not really. It starts off as a small lie, and then they realize they got away with it, and they continue to lie more and more
Main character is the stereotypical loser hero archetype who has to save everyone he sees, whether they’re good or bad, and he’s significantly weaker than everyone else with powers despite being able to control two, while they can only control one.
Yeah, I’m sure we can all tell how pathetic the MC is gonna be just from the entire synopsis being about how he can’t live without her. Fu¢|<ing loser
Alright, now it’s weird. Dude’s gonna be fine with other people seeing his girl’s body
Read 41 chapters so far, and although the plot itself and the grammar are both good, the story is somewhat rushed, the dialogue is a little too long when it should be more spaced out, and the romance is really just not good at all, and is way too rushed without any actual development.
Yeah, because leaving him alone because you’re mad he was gonna leave you alone sure makes sense
It never said he can only be with her, moron
How would you know she has ties? Lmao